Bewerbung [Technical-Support]

[Der-Kazuya]

Von mir auch ein

Ja

Du bist hielfsbereit und kennst dich gut aus .

[Sanman.]

Tjo schade das du nicht geaddet wurdest, hab das gefühl als ob manchmal die Prem user wirklich bevorzugt werden..

[King']

Originally Posted by [Š]anm[À]n™

Tjo schade das du nicht geaddet wurdest, hab das gefühl als ob manchmal die Prem user wirklich bevorzugt werden..

Glaube ich eher weniger, da Allesvergeben, seine Bewerbung schon länger offen hatte, wenn ich mich nicht täusche.

B2t: Ansonsten hätte es Diablo ebenfalls mehr als verdient.

[Inѕane]

Er ist der, der für meine technischen Probleme immer eine Lösung weiß und mir schon mehrmals geholfen hat. Jetzt wurde zwar schon AV geadded aber er hätte es genauso verdient. :F

[Diablo_]

Originally Posted by [Š]anm[À]n™

Tjo schade das du nicht geaddet wurdest, hab das gefühl als ob manchmal die Prem user wirklich bevorzugt werden..

Hi,

ich glaube weniger, dass die Admins sich von soetwas beeinflussen lassen. Die Admins wissen was sie tun und sie waren oder sind halt der Meinung, dass AllesVergeben der Bessere von uns beiden ist.

Was das Premium angeht, ich werde mir vieleicht kein Premium kaufen aber aufjdenfall Elitegold. Um E*Pvpers zu unterstützen, jedoch erst Anfag der Sommerferien, ich wohne in NRW, das dauert noch fast 2 Wochen. Das wird den Vorgang aber auch nicht beschleunigen.

Grüße

[.Sly']

Siehst sehr freundlich,hilfsbereit,sympathisch aus.
Von mir auch ein ja, außerdem finde ich gut das du nicht schlapp machst, nur weil jemand anderes für die Sektion geaddet wurde :>

[aznproud]

von mir auch ein JA !
Du wirkst sehr kompetent und scheinst viel Erfahrung in diesem Gebiet mitbringen zu können -
Die Art und Weise wie du hier deine Bewerbung verfasst hast und wie du mit anderen Leuten hier umgehst find ich vorbildlich, von daher würde ich dich hier gerne als Moderator sehen (:

[Diablo_]

Hi,

habe nun auch eine englische Version von meiner Bewerbung hinzugefügt. Auch wenn es kaum englisch sprachige Leute in "meiner" Section gibt, gucken sich vieleicht aber welche meine Bewerbung an.

Grüße

[.RyaN']

100%!
Du hast mir schon so oft geholfen, als ich versagt habe!!

dickes JA!

[Dande.]

Eindeutig Ja sehr hilfsbereiter User
Hilft immer gerne und gibt auch Sehr gute tipps und ist immer nett

[theitfan1337]

 Spoiler

Before I start, i want to start with a little foreword. sounds odd
Foreword:

I apply here for the position as of MODERATOR. Some of you might (as you assume them to know) already know that AllesVergeben is now has been recently added. My application will stay open because maybe a moderator will be needed in the future. actually this sentence is more or less ok, but due the fact that it sound very strange I would recommend you to phrase it like this: Due to a possible prospective need of another moderator, this application will be left open. Feedbacks are is still welcome. Now comes the essential Let's go right ahead to the essential part of this application..

Who are I am am I?

My name is Philip D. and I'm just became 16 years old since last May. I still go to school, to a "Gymnasium" in the 9th class. I want to finish the "Abitur" (it's like A-Level) and then I want to work as a professional soldier or else I want to study IT. In my opinion, it's much better to use high school and a-levels as equivalents to "Gymnasium" and "Abitur", as mentioning the German words harms the "flow" due to unavoidable complex phrasing.

Contact data:

Skype: tobacco1995

Elitepvpers: private message or profile message

E-Mail: Of course I have one, if it's needed, I will post the adress on request

What is the reason I want to apply?

First of all because Gordge moderated alone. Furthermore I want to support the community further. I always liked to help other people and so I asked myself "why not as moderator?". Unfortunately some people just post stupid comments or things which are just spam and not helpfull. Many people wrote me private messages and told me, to I should apply for this position, so did 1 moderator, too. I know how much I can learn here in this forum and of course I want to learn more here. The main reason is, I want to support Elitepvpers and all the people here.

Do I have experience with the subject?

My knowledge about computertechnology is pretty large. I was always interested in stuff like that and I made sure that I get got the basics and plus some advanced knowledge about this. I have experience since many years and I always helped my familiy and my neighbours with their problems I earned a lot of experience yet, e.g. while helping out my family or my neighbours with technical issues. (I guess that is what you actually meant, I am still uncertain about this sentence.. Some day As I finally joined here, and I could use my knowledge to help the community.

Am I mentally prepared and fitting for such a position?

Of course I am. There are no stupid questions, just stupid answers. I help everyone who needs help if I'm able to help I help whereever I can. It doesn't matter how small or big the questions are or if someone might think, it is a stupid question. I'm very dedicated with on helping other people. I get very much private messages per day and it's not the first time, I had to delete some messages. Sometimes I get a few messages synchronous but everytime I'm able to stay calm. Everytime I'm friendly and obliging and I won't post ironical oder sarcastical answers. I read the problems carefully and try to help and I try to help the user preventive. This whole paragraph sounds very strange to me, I would highly recommend you to change both, the phrasing and the content.

Am I active?

Of course I am (déjà vû ). Daily I'm here for visiting the board at least 4 hours per day. When I know that I can't be online for a day, I will let the team know it (Of course you will, this is nothing to mention or even discuss.). On week-ends I'm more than 4 hours online but of course I still have a reallife. My time spent on the board increases on week-ends.

Language skills existing What about my fluencies?

Yes, I'm born in Germany so I can speak/write it very well. Of course I can speak/write in English but I don't have to do it very much often. 98% of the people in this section are able to write texts in German, 2% have to write in English. I've never seen another language there.

Experiences as moderator?

Unfortunately none. Elitepvpers is the only board I am/was had ever been active on, so I couldn't get experiences as moderator but I don't want to make my experiences somewhere else.

Finally Closing words:

I would be very happy when if I will be moderator here and I hope for am looking forward to receive a posivite result feedback. Also I would be very happy when you post positive or negative feedbacks. They shoudl be helpfull for me. Constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated

Now it's your turn.

This might look like a huge list of mistakes, but actually your English is understandable and should be suitable for the two percent you were speaking of above
I just paid attention to the most serious faults, my correction is still not on a pleasuring level. Improving the application's style to such a level is still up to you

[Diablo_]

Originally Posted by Nomad'

 Spoiler

Before I start, i want to start with a little foreword. sounds odd
Foreword:

I apply here for the position as of MODERATOR. Some of you might (as you assume them to know) already know that AllesVergeben is now has been recently added. My application will stay open because maybe a moderator will be needed in the future. actually this sentence is more or less ok, but due the fact that it sound very strange I would recommend you to phrase it like this: Due to a possible prospective need of another moderator, this application will be left open. Feedbacks are is still welcome. Now comes the essential Let's go right ahead to the essential part of this application..

Who are I am am I?

My name is Philip D. and I'm just became 16 years old since last May. I still go to school, to a "Gymnasium" in the 9th class. I want to finish the "Abitur" (it's like A-Level) and then I want to work as a professional soldier or else I want to study IT. In my opinion, it's much better to use high school and a-levels as equivalents to "Gymnasium" and "Abitur", as mentioning the German words harms the "flow" due to unavoidable complex phrasing.

Contact data:

Skype: tobacco1995

Elitepvpers: private message or profile message

E-Mail: Of course I have one, if it's needed, I will post the adress on request

What is the reason I want to apply?

First of all because Gordge moderated alone. Furthermore I want to support the community further. I always liked to help other people and so I asked myself "why not as moderator?". Unfortunately some people just post stupid comments or things which are just spam and not helpfull. Many people wrote me private messages and told me, to I should apply for this position, so did 1 moderator, too. I know how much I can learn here in this forum and of course I want to learn more here. The main reason is, I want to support Elitepvpers and all the people here.

Do I have experience with the subject?

My knowledge about computertechnology is pretty large. I was always interested in stuff like that and I made sure that I get got the basics and plus some advanced knowledge about this. I have experience since many years and I always helped my familiy and my neighbours with their problems I earned a lot of experience yet, e.g. while helping out my family or my neighbours with technical issues. (I guess that is what you actually meant, I am still uncertain about this sentence.. Some day As I finally joined here, and I could use my knowledge to help the community.

Am I mentally prepared and fitting for such a position?

Of course I am. There are no stupid questions, just stupid answers. I help everyone who needs help if I'm able to help I help whereever I can. It doesn't matter how small or big the questions are or if someone might think, it is a stupid question. I'm very dedicated with on helping other people. I get very much private messages per day and it's not the first time, I had to delete some messages. Sometimes I get a few messages synchronous but everytime I'm able to stay calm. Everytime I'm friendly and obliging and I won't post ironical oder sarcastical answers. I read the problems carefully and try to help and I try to help the user preventive. This whole paragraph sounds very strange to me, I would highly recommend you to change both, the phrasing and the content.

Am I active?

Of course I am (déjà vû ). Daily I'm here for visiting the board at least 4 hours per day. When I know that I can't be online for a day, I will let the team know it (Of course you will, this is nothing to mention or even discuss.). On week-ends I'm more than 4 hours online but of course I still have a reallife. My time spent on the board increases on week-ends.

Language skills existing What about my fluencies?

Yes, I'm born in Germany so I can speak/write it very well. Of course I can speak/write in English but I don't have to do it very much often. 98% of the people in this section are able to write texts in German, 2% have to write in English. I've never seen another language there.

Experiences as moderator?

Unfortunately none. Elitepvpers is the only board I am/was had ever been active on, so I couldn't get experiences as moderator but I don't want to make my experiences somewhere else.

Finally Closing words:

I would be very happy when if I will be moderator here and I hope for am looking forward to receive a posivite result feedback. Also I would be very happy when you post positive or negative feedbacks. They shoudl be helpfull for me. Constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated

Now it's your turn.

This might look like a huge list of mistakes, but actually your English is understandable and should be suitable for the two percent you were speaking of above
I just paid attention to the most serious faults, my correction is still not on a pleasuring level. Improving the application's style to such a level is still up to you

Hi,

thank you very much but some of your corrections are wrong or not necessary.

But you're right, there are some mistakes, it's because i wrote it very late-night and in my notepad. The day after I just copied it without correcting it..

Greetings

[[F]ck.U..?™]

Meiner Meinung JA!
Hat mir schnell mein Problem gelöst.
Und wenn er was sagt, hat er auch Ahnung davon. Seine Beiträge helfen und bringen einen weiter.
Dazu ist er auch noch oft Online und nett.

[W4MB0]

JA Mann....

[.Crash]

Bin zwar nicht immer der gleichen Meinung aber du bist auf jedenfall ein sehr Aktiver und Hilfsbereiter und versuchst nicht nur zu helfen sondern schaffst es auch meistens