I like the lil lake you made in the last screenie
The rest is so... plain... put some monster 'n stuff in. Also, i would put more objects into the map. Try (something wich not devs dare to do) to make for example a forest, with plants, trees lil lakes, old statues (so it looks as if it has a history) 'n stuff.
I like that your truly taking time to make this. But to give you an advice: i've always wanted to see something like this:
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