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[schnotte]

Hey,
Ich habe morgen meinen letzten Prüfungstag und ich muss dort einen Englisch Monolog halten. Ich habe schon etwas fertig und ich würde mich freuen wenn ihr das bitte korrigieren könntet. Da ich jetzt nicht der beste in Englisch bin )

Today I'll tell you something about me!
I am 15 years old and I live with my mother and my stepfather
on a farm in ********
My best friend is Benny, he is to me like a brother.
My hobbies are playing soccer, swimming and playing computer games.
I am born in ********, about 2 years later we moved to Mallorca.
There we lived 4 years. In Mallorca, my parents have separated. After the 4 years my mother and I moved to Germany. There, we lived the first time with my grandma and then we went to
*******. In ********, I completed primary school. Then we moved to Baden-Wuerttemberg in a city name Gundelsheim. There, I have the 6th made. Then we moved back to ********. Here I am about to finish secondary school and then go to vocational school.
My mother and my stepfather have their own animal welfare organization.
That is why we live in a village. We currently have 20 cats over.
Because we help cats in need. Most are taught to get back to a good home. It is not easy to have so many cats so I help at home to feed on the animals. My stepfather worked at Draeger in Luebeck. My mother has it's own textile printing company. The good that I always get nice T-shirt is free.

[lolkenschlol]

Originally Posted by schnotte

Hey,
Ich habe morgen meinen letzten Prüfungstag und ich muss dort einen Englisch Monolog halten. Ich habe schon etwas fertig und ich würde mich freuen wenn ihr das bitte korrigieren könntet. Da ich jetzt nicht der beste in Englisch bin )

Today I'll tell you something about me!
I am 15 years old and I live with my mother and my stepfather
on a farm in ********
My best friend is Benny, he is like a big brother.
My hobbies are playing soccer, swimming and playing computer games.
I am born in ********, about 2 years later we moved to Mallorca.
There we lived 4 years. In Mallorca, my parents have separated. After the fourth year my mother and I moved to Germany. There, we lived at my grandmas house and then we moved to
*******. In ********, where i completed primary school. Then we moved to Baden-Wuerttemberg in a city name Gundelsheim. There, I have the 6th made(ich versteh hier nich die satzstellung sag des mir mal in deutsch pls D: ) . Then we moved back to ********. Here I am about to finish secondary school and then go to vocational school.
My mother and my stepfather have their own animal welfare organization.
That is why we live in a village. We currently have about 20 cats.
Because we help cats who have no home, have problems with sickness , ... . Most are taught to get back to a good home. It is not easy to have so many cats so I help at home to feed all the Cats. My stepfather worked at Draeger in Luebeck. My mother has it's own textile printing company. The good that I always get nice T-shirt is free.

so den rest hab ich übersehen

[schnotte]

Vielen dank :3 There, i Have the 6th made. Dort habe ich die 6. Klasse gemacht.

[lolkenschlol]

Originally Posted by schnotte

Vielen dank :3 There, i Have the 6th made. Dort habe ich die 6. Klasse gemacht.

There i finished 6class

[schnotte]

Danke dir nochmals! Ich werde noch etwas dazu schreiben und hier Posten würde mich freuen wenn du wieder drüber schauen würdest ))

[Chicken17]

Satzbau: Subjekt Verb Objekt (war auch da mit dem there, i have the 6th made falsch)