[COMIC]

MarnelAristaeus · 01/31/2011, 09:41

Amy As herself
Jin As himself
Ronan As himself
Elesis As herself
Nalaar Special Guest (Male)

One day there was 2 teams who we're very good at fighting and saving people
Their names are Jin and Nalaar their team was called Inverse, after beating the bad guys
they went straight to Amy's Concert Nalaar have a crush on her and so is Jin but Jin kept it a secret..
Note: Nalaar's power is Electric And Jin's power is fire
After Amy's concert Nalaar went back stage to look for Amy and ask for her Cellphone Number

Nalaar: Umm Hey Amy I'm your #1 fan and your my ultimate crush!!, Can I get your cellphone number?

Amy: Oh.. Thanks oh by the way heres my cellphone # ------------

Jin saw Nalaar getting Amy's cellphone # and he was kinda jealous because Jin also have a crush on Amy..

Jin: Hey Nalaar what did you do back stage?

Nalaar: Oh I just wanted to see Amy you know I have a crush on her >.<

Jin: Yeah your like her #1 fan and stalker *laughs*

Nalaar: Hey I'm not a stalker ._.

Jin: Come on I was just kidding ^,^

Nalaar: Yeah.. Hey you hungry?

Jin: Kinda

Nalaar: Wanna go to a restaurant and eat?

Jin: Hmm, Nah if we go to a restaurant we wont be able to eat because of our fans >.<

Nalaar: Right, Lets just go home and call --------

Jin: Good

So they went home and ate

Nalaar: *Laughing*

Jin: Hey your laughing to death there who are you texting?

Nalaar: Just someone *laughs* [its amy]

Jin: Well I'm kinda tired I'm gonna sleep now how about you?

Nalaar: I'll sleep later, Town needs to be protected

Jin: Okay..

*The Other day, friday*

Jin: Nalaar we have a problem, Big problem

Nalaar: Why what is it?

Jin: I think it's kidnap again

Nalaar: Man I hate kidnaps >.<

Jin: Everyone does

Nalaar: Yeah well let's go

So they went to the kidnapping area and the hostage was Amy

Nalaar: *shocked*

Jin: *shocked*

Nalaar: Jin its Amy!

Jin: I know lets save her!

Nalaar: Imma pawn this kidnappers!

Jin and Nalaar fighted Ronan and Elesis [Their the kidnapper

]

Jin got pawned a little, Nalaar Fighting to death..

Jin: Nalaar don't use your powers Amy might get electric shock!

Nalaar: *Sweating*

Jin thinks of a plan how to save Amy..

Jin: Nalaar I have a good idea

Nalaar: Whats that?

Jin: Grab my hand

Nalaar grabbed Jin's hand

Jin: Throw me

Nalaar Throwed Jin to the kidnappers and Jin used fire to burn the kidnappers masks
so Ronan and Elesis run away so they wont be seen

Nalaar: Jin, Amy Are you alright?

Jin: I'm good

Amy: I'm Fine thank you ^.^

Nalaar: *Blushed*

After saving Amy Jin also asked for Amy's cellphone #

Jin: Amy can I get your cellphone #?

Amy: Sure you can my hero ^,^

Jin: *Smiles*

After Jin getting Amy's cellphone # Nalaar and Jin went home and waited for reports

Jin: *Texting Amy* Amy wanna go out sometime?
Amy: *Replying Jin* Sure Lets go out tommorrow night
Jin: *Replying Amy* Okay I'll pick you up what time?
Amy: *Replying Jin* 7:00PM See ya

Nalaar Thinks about the kidnapping incedent *Flashbacks*

Nalaar: Imma pawn this kidnappers!
Nalaar: Thats right I didn't saved Amy Jin did *dissapointed*

*The Other Day*

Jins big day

Jin picked up Amy in her house and they will go to the restaurant..

Jin: So what do you want to order?

Amy: Anything, you order

Jin: Okay, Waiter can I have 2 glasses and red wine thanks

Jin: So hows your love life?

Amy: Oh I'm single waitting for the right one

Jin: Thats pretty hard to believe ^.^

Amy: Its true..

Jin: If thats the case, *Jins pulls out a gift* for you...

Amy: Oh thanks ^.^ Amy opens the gift, *shocked*

Jin: So..

Amy: Yes!

][Letters content:

Amy Can you be my girlfriend I've been watching you in the TV searching pictures of you in google and ever since I saw you I already fell in love with you..

--END OF PART ONE--

Chikun · 01/31/2011, 10:07

wow another comic tread! but seriously and no offense this one is *****.. :3

.Sincere · 01/31/2011, 10:29

-- @ Antique. @
Hey. Dude you don't need to flame.
And even this TS is more senior than you, Respect this dude.
I think that Mods doesn't care about this guy's sentences.

1.Reported for Flaming

-Lacie · 01/31/2011, 10:35

Antique you turned violent.

.Dean · 01/31/2011, 10:51

Nice comic Sarah. A little rushed (like mine) but very creative! Join the Fan Fic Comic Club!

teaball · 01/31/2011, 11:15

well, i dun really know if sarah will consider that as flame/rude posts. we really are like that in chatango...

MarnelAristaeus · 01/31/2011, 11:40

@Teaball Only in chatango but not here Antique should be banned.

.Celtics · 01/31/2011, 11:43

Chatango = not so strict
Here = rules are strict

So, its still flaming

.Sincere · 01/31/2011, 11:57

Lol.. Nicee

Hey Sarah..
Where did you get the name NALAAR?
Seems im interested in this nalaar?
Where did it come from? TV show? or something?

teaball · 01/31/2011, 11:58

well, ok.
Strict as you are

.Sincere · 01/31/2011, 12:04

Lol
@teaball
Sarah was strict? or
Sarah is strict?

Yeaaah! Need part 2..
Can't wait..
Prediction:
Jin and Nalaar will become enemies? or
Amy will become a " TWO-TIMER "

~~EternalSins~~ · 01/31/2011, 12:52

@Antique
I don't care if you want to flame with Sarah at Chatango but
NOT HERE!

.ikazzuma* · 01/31/2011, 14:02

yep . do not flame here it is still a violation (: if you hate comics do not read it .

hhaha !but i love it . lols haha

.Isaac251 · 01/31/2011, 15:21

LOL..
Such a good comic.
@ Antique
Dont be KJ~

~~Match*Star.~~ · 01/31/2011, 20:46

Nice one ~SarahX23~