[COMIC]Grand Chase rewritten

[EternalSins]

Update

• Final episode is out.
• The end of season 1.

Richard625/EternalSins will come back on 5th.
So look forward for some major cleanup.

Regards, sOap116

[♫SumiyoshiSS]

This is fit in the definition of a very good comic.
Oh wait that may be an insult...
This is BEYOND very good.

[EternalSins]

Why thank you graystar.
To me it's just a hobby of mine since I'm bored.....
Anyway this is the current schedule for the season 2 release.

Schedule

• Weekdays
  1-3 updates per day.
• Weekends
  1 update on the special episode and season 1.

The updates are

• New episodes for season 2 and special episode only.
• Major remodel on season 1.

The release date for season 2 is on the 10th.
But the updates for season 1 are on the 8th.
So look forward for the new look of season 1.

[demonic02]

nice story haha D @nicholzons : my bias is SEOHYUN ~!!!

[.Dean]

Yo Rich~! (can I call ya that?) I wised there would be names... when you update this.

[EternalSins]

Yeah trying to change the look for season one, try read the Final episode.
I think i already put the names.

[Chikun]

i hope after reading this we will able to see a digital version of your comic :d.

[EternalSins]

I already finish the whole visual novel, but i can't release because of the freaking copyrights........
I have to literally get down on my knees and beg in front of them in person....

[.Dean]

Originally Posted by EternalSins

Yeah trying to change the look for season one, try read the Final episode.
I think i already put the names.

Dude, the link to your episode I think is really broken. It just takes me to the 3rd page of your rewritten 15 episodes.. -__-"

[EternalSins]

weird.........
I took the link directly from my post.........
It should direct you through there......

[auverin007]

Originally Posted by .Dean

Dude, the link to your episode I think is really broken. It just takes me to the 3rd page of your rewritten 15 episodes.. -__-"

You will be directed to the TRUE link in a short period.

[EternalSins]

Hey guys, as promised this is the release of season 2.
There will be a second episode for season 2 tonight but don't get your hopes up since I'm too busy this year.
So enjoy~!

---Prologue---

 Spoiler

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[Elesis]
*pant**pant*
Dammit.....he's too strong.........

[Lire]
Ele.........sis...........st.........op........... ..

[Arme]
Lire enough!
You're heavily wounded to even talk right now!

[Lire]
Bu....t........Ele..sis.......she.....*cough**coug h*

[Ryan]
I'm sorry for this Lire........it's for your own good...........

Ryan punched Lire in the gut suddenly.

[Lire]
Gah-

[Amy]
*gasp*

[Jin]
DUDE!

[Ronan]
............

[Ryan]
You're not going to say anything..?

[Ronan]
No.....I'll probably do the same thing..........so thanks.........

[Arme]
.............

[Scorch]
I thought you were the granddaughter of a great swordsman..........
But I thought wrong, you're nothing compared to your grandfather.

[Elesis]
You.............you know my grandfather?

[Scorch]
Yes I did, and i was the one who killed him, and this very same person will also kill you.
Now, get out of my sight.

Scorch threw a sword at Elesis.

[Elesis]
.................

*stabbing sound*

[Ryan]
ELESIS!!!!!!!!!

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---Episode 1---
A routine-ish day

 Spoiler

Today is monday, a new day of the 2nd week here in Bimersiah.
Lire's wedding is around the corner.
Kathryne is getting her wedding gown ready, as expected of a fashion freak

[Kathy]
Hey!

Ronan always trying to settle down with Arme, but that ends up with a huge fight.

[Arme]
I SAID NO!!!

[Ronan]
But.......but Arme!

[Arme]
NO BUTS!!!!

Elesis and Ryan are staring on the same sky at the window.
Just-

[Elesis/Ryan]
Like a normal routine day, huh?
*sigh*

[Ryan]
Hey Elesis, don't you get tired with this?

[Elesis]
Of what?

[Ryan]
Of this, I mean it's the same EVERYDAY, i can already guessed what Ronan is going to say.
Nope that's a mistake, I clearly memorize what he's going to say.

[Elesis]
Yeah I already know that...........
*SIGH*
Man......I can't believe Lire is going to get married next week.

[Ryan]
Yeah, I hope she's happy over there....

[Elesis]
heh.....

[Ryan]
Ermm, hope you don't mind me asking but, did I do something funny?

[Elesis]
No you didn't do anything, it's just that I remembered the bet that we made between me, Amy, Mari and Arme.

[Ryan]
What kind?

[Elesis]
Well we bet that when you and Lire are going to get married.

[Ryan]
*cough**cough*
WHAT?
Anyway back to the topic, so who win?

[Elesis]
Well no one, and of course I lost.

[Ryan]
*sigh*
Man.........I really was too late huh?

[Elesis]
...........
Yeah......
But I got one question though.

[Ryan]
What is it?

[Elesis]
Are you happy?

[Ryan]
.............

Ryan looked Elesis with a sad face, after a few second he look towards the sky with high hopes.

[Ryan]
Yeah, even though I let her go, if she's happy, then i'm happy.

[Elesis]
..........
Heh, well expected of a trigger happy guy.

[Ryan]
Heh, that's the same to you.
Hey let's get out of this rut.

[Elesis]
Meaning?

Elesis drinks her tea when suddenly-

[Ryan]
Let's go on a date.

[Elesis]
PFFFFTTTTTT!

Elesis sprayed the tea at Ryan.

[Author]
Lol that's funneh.

[Ryan]
...........Nice.........
Was that payback for last week?

[Elesis]
Paybac-
SCREW THAT!
DATE!?
ARE YOU KIDDING ME!!??

[Ryan]
You think I have ulterior motives?
I'm offended Elesis..............

[Elesis]
.....
Ar-are you serious?

[Ryan]
yeah.

Elesis quieted down for a second, took a deep breath and-

[Elesis]
O-ok fine, but you'll follow me where ever I want to go ok?

She replied with a blush.

[Ryan]
Ok it's a deal.
By the way one question.
Why you're blushing?

[Elesis]
It-it's none of your business.....

She replied while averting her gaze and scratching her cheek.

[Ryan]
?
Anyway let's go before they notice.

[Elesis]
Ok let's go.....

As they were reaching for the door.

[Ronan/Arme]
Where are you guys going?

[Elesis]
Just for a wal-

[Ryan]
A date at the village center, why you're guys gonna tag along?

[Ronan/Arme]
??!!

[Elesis]
R-Ryan!

The couple looked each other and suddenly an evil grin appeared on their faces.

[Author]
Lol this is funneh/scary.

[Ronan]
Yeah sure we can tag along.

[Arme]
Oh my gosh this is going to be fun!

The couple went out, the others didn't notice since they were too busy doing something.

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Few hours passed, Ronan and Arme was having fun while Ryan and Elesis are having some awkward time, as expected.
They go to a lot of embarrassing places when suddenly Ryan suggest them by going to a fair.
At that moment Ryan's wish was fulfilled, he finally get to see Elesis fun side, especially during the throwing hoops games.
Ronan and Arme was surprised and shocked since they never to get see her like that.
After a few more games they head back to the inn.

[Elesis]
Man that was fun!

[Arme]
Man I'm tired.........

[Ronan]
Yeah........I can't believe all our plan were ruined when Ryan suggest the fair.........

[Ryan]
That's the whole point...
I was trying to get out of the rut and have some fun but you guys ruined it.

[Elesis]
Hey Ryan, I can't believe you were good at those archery games!

[Ryan]
Yeah, I copied some from Lire so some of her techniques were stick on me i guess.

[Arme]
Wait you copied LIRE'S tech?

[Ryan]
Yeah, why you asked?

[Arme]
Just asking, anyway one more question, when exactly you started copied her tech?

[Ryan]
I guess when we're at Kaze's castle.

[Ronan]
Arme, you're thinking what I'm thinking?

[Arme]
Yeah, come on, I think it was somewhere in the main library.

[Ronan]
Ok let's go.

[Elesis]
Hey where are you guys going?

[Ronan]
The main library, gotta check something out.

[Ryan]
Ok see ya, don't be late for dinner guys, we're eating barbecue tonight.

[Arme]
Just start dinner without us.

[Elesis]
Ok, come on Ryan, Seyren is probably looking for you right now.

[Ryan]
yeah let's go.
Oh by the way, was it fun?

Elesis stops and looks at Ryan with a smile.

[Elesis]
Yeah, it was fun.

[Ryan]
.............
I'm glad.

[Elesis]
What was that?

[Ryan]
Nothing.

The day ends.
Ryan and Elesis went home and started making dinner.
The dinner was lively like always even without Arme and Ronan.

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[Arme]
Ronan, look here.

[Ronan]
...................
No it can't be, I thought only Seyren can do this kind of magic.

[Arme]
Yeah but Seyren trained himself to get that magic and it's a failure.
But on Ryan's case-

[Ronan]
He did that unconsciously and naturally, and unlike Seyren, he copied and remembered that tech by seeing.
Only one magic can fit all of this.

[Arme]
Yeah, the forbidden lost magic..........
'The Third Eye'

Arme and Ronan was searching for something and it seems they figured it out on that very night.
'The Third Eye'
What is this magic?
What's the connection between it and Ryan?
Find out in the next episode.
'Truth'.

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---Episode 2---
Truth

 Spoiler

It's Tuesday today, a routine training day for the team.
Seyren is sparring with Elesis.
Arme is with Mari.
Kathryne is with....well.........herself...

[Author]
That just sounded wrong.......

Just your imagination.
Anyway Ryan is with-

[Ronan]
SOUL WAVE!!!

[Ryan]
WOAH!!

Ryan.
Their sparring match isn't like a sparring match since Ronan is literally going to kill him for no reason.

[Ryan]
Dude it's just a sparring match!!!

[Ronan]
Oh hell it ain't!!
ABYSS STORM!!!

[Ryan]
DUDE!!!

It started a few hours ago.
When the team was deciding which is going to be their opponent.
Elesis picked Ryan for her partner but Ronan refuse and said-

[Ronan]
Me and Ryan, no one else.

[Ryan/Elesis]
EH??

And as expected, both of them were surprised.
After that the sparring match started and getting intense by the second.

[Ryan]
GAH!!

[Ronan]
Come on, I thought a druid like you can avoid that kind of attack.

[Ryan]
Yeah I can but this is just a sparring match!
I thought there will be no body contact!

[Ronan]
Screw that, we're going prison rules now.

[Ryan]
Wait what!?

[Elesis]
Ronan enough!
This is just a sparring match!
I won't let you go any further!

[Ronan]
Get out of my way Elesis.

[Elesis]
NO!
If you want to get him, you have to go through me!

[Ronan]
Fine.

Ronan raises his sword, ready to give the blow.

*thump**thump

[Ryan]
!?

[Arme]
Ronan no!!!!

Ronan swings his sword down.
Elesis closes her eyes, as if accepting her death, and then-

*stabs*

[Arme]
GASP!

Elesis open her eyes and saw Ryan, stops Ronan's sword with his bloody left hand, while holding her sword on the right.

[Ryan]
Don't be ridiculous Ronan.........
WHAT DO YOU WANT DAMMIT!!!

[Ronan]
YOUR LIFE!!!

Ronan punched him but Ryan blocked it with his right elbow, pushing both sides away.

[Elesis]
Ryan!!

[Ryan]
Don't Elesis, just don't.
This is my fight.

[Ronan]
Damn straight.
Now pick up your axe!

[Ryan]
No, Elesis sword will be enough to beat the crap out of you.

[Ronan]
USE YOUR AXE!
I WON'T FIGHT SOMEONE WITH A DISADVANTAGE WEAPON!!

[Ryan]
Heh............
Disadvantage?
Didn't you know?
My weapon was always been blades, no matter what the shape is, I can use it.

[Ronan]
Heh, it's true then, you have the 'Third Eye' all along.

[Kathy]
!?
Third Eye??

[Elesis]
Third Eye?
What's that?

[Arme]
.........
It's a forbidden lost magic.
A magic that feared by ancient beings.

[Elesis]
You're not making any sense.

[Ryan]
It's a magic that can help the user master anything, in my case, it's just weapons.
Anything with a bladed edge.
But in due time, I can master everything, even magic.

[Elesis]
What's so bad about that?

[Ronan]
Ryan is a druid right?
He was outcast by Eryuell because of that.

[Elesis]
Wait a minute..........
Eryuell..........that's-

[Arme]
Lire's homeland.
Everyone within that island have the Third Eye magic but it's failures.
Ryan however was perfect and completed.
He can master anything by just seeing.
While the others have to at least learn the basic first, after that they will master it on their own on that very day.

[Ronan]
That magic is a forbidden gift

[Ryan]
And a curse, I lived as an outcast for many years now, trampled over because of it, hated by others because of it, envied by others because of it.
Now enough with this talk, let's finish this.

[Ronan]
Heh, I'll kill you in one blow!

[Ryan]
Bring it.

Ronan appeared behind Ryan and sheathed his sword.

[Ronan]
Back slash.

Multiple blue lights appeared around Ryan and explode instantly, but Ryan dodge it and comes for his head.

[Ryan]
RAAAAAHHHHH!!!!

[Ronan]
Cra-

Ryan comes in for the kill, but-

[Elesis]
RYAN NO!!!!

Ryan stop suddenly, the sword is already at Ronan's neck.

[Ronan]
Come on, go ahead, kill me!

[Elesis]
Ryan don't!

Ryan threw the sword away and starts walking.

[Ronan]
WHERE ARE YOU GOING!!!

[Ryan]
I'm leaving.
since the truth is out, I won't fit in here anymore.

[Ronan]
COME BACK HERE AND FINISH OUR FIGHT!

[Ryan]
No, the fight was already finished.
If Elesis hasn't stop me, you're dead.
Thanks for everything.
Especially you Elesis, I had a great time yesterday.

[Elesis]
Ryan.....

Ryan walks away, leaving everyone.

[Ronan]
Tch, well that's one less trouble to deal wi-

*slaps*

Elesis slapped him.

[Arme]
............

[Kathy]
GASP!

[Elesis]
I can't believe you did that........
I can't believe you didn't trust him............
I CAN'T BELIEVE I TRUST YOU!!!!!!!

Elesis cried in front of him.

[Author]
Damn that's the second time she cried like that....
The first was back at the Final episode on season one....

[Ronan]
Elesis....

[Elesis]
DON'T!!
JUST DON'T!!

She walks away and started to run.

[Ronan]
Elesis wait!

[Arme]
Don't, let her be, let her cool off on her own.

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Elesis ran and ran, looking for Ryan.
She searched him for hours and ended up at the port during sunset.
And that's where he finally found him.

[Elesis]
Ryan......

[Ryan]
Elesis?
Why you're her-

She ran and hug him tight, trying not to let him go.

[Elesis]
Why?
You've withstood many pains and suffering when you finally found your happiness.
Why you want to leave us now so you can do that all over again?
Why.....?

[Ryan]
!?
..........

Ryan hugged him back, as if to comfort a lost child.

[Ryan]
You cried today huh?
Yeah I finally found happiness......
But I have to let it go so it can remain that way......
I wasn't fit in with other people and isolation is the only way for us elves......
Especially me....

[Elesis]
But why..........
You let go Lire so she can stay happy...
Now you're letting us go so we can be happy too?

[Ryan]
Yeah........
I know it's selfish but it's the only way.
But don't worry, I won't forget you, since yesterday was the day where i finally able reach the greatest happiness.

[Elesis]
Huh?
What do you mean?

[Ryan]
Your smile Elesis, your smile is the only thing that can make me happy.

Their eyes met, and their lips touched.

[Author]
Ahhh.....A perfect love scene, a sunset at the background with a kissing couple in it.
Just beautiful.
Lol you playboy!

[Ryan]
I've gotta go Elesis.
Hope I'll see you again in the near future.

Ryan starts walking towards the ship.

[Elesis]
Ryan wait!

He stopped.

[Elesis]
I love you...

He turns and-

[Ryan]
I know.

Ryan boarded the ship and it sails off.
Elesis watch the ship sets sail.
She started walking, back to the inn they're living.

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[Arme]
Oh Elesis you're back.
You're just in time for dinner.

[Elesis]
I'm not.....uhh.........hungry.

Elesis walk up the stairs.

[Ronan]
Wait, did you find Ryan?

[Elesis]
............
No.

She starts walking to her room and she laid down on her bed.

[Elesis]
Ryan.......you idiot...........

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The battle between Ronan and Ryan has ended.
Ryan's 'Truth' has comes out and reveals his origin.
Because of it Ryan decided to leave the Grand Chase team.
Elesis searched for him for hours after that and managed to confess her love to him.
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[Ryan]
*Sigh*
Well back to square one.........
Now where should I head this time?

[???]
Got dumped?

[Ryan]
?!
WHOSE THERE?!

[???]
Now now calm down pal.

A man with a black masked appeared in front of him.

[Ryan]
What do you want?

[???]
Hmm?
Nothing actually, but I came here with a proposal.

[Ryan]
Proposal?
What kind?

[???]
Well, JOIN OUR TEAM OR DIE!

[Ryan]
?!

[???]
Just kidding.
But I'm serious though, would you like to join our group?
We're pretty short handed right now and we would like your help.

[Ryan]
What if I refuse?

[???]
No harm done, I've plenty of candidates which quite frankly, is more qualified than you, but you're a special case and i have to invite you personally.

[Ryan]
I see, then one more question.
What your group operates?

[???]
Sorry but I can't tell you that, only the qualified members may know what 'it' is.

[Ryan]
.............
Fine.
Whatever 'it' is, I'm in.

[???]
Good choice, let's head towards Eryuell Island.

[Ryan]
?!
Eryuell...........Island...........

[???]
What's wrong?

[Ryan]
Nothing.
By the way I didn't get your name.

[Scorch]
Oh right how rude of me.
The name is Scorch, current leader of the Eryuell black ops.
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Scorch came in for Ryan and invite him within his group.
What is his motives?
Find out in the next Episode.
Wedding day.

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---Episode 3---
Wedding day.

 Spoiler

Today is the wedding day, the day the bride has waited and dreamed for.........
Well it ain't on Lire's case.....

[Lire]
WHY?????!!!!
I'M TOO YOUNG TO GET MARRIED!!!
I HAVE SO MUCH TO DO!!!
BESIDES I'M IN LOVE WITH-

Arme shuts Lire's mouth with her hand.

[Arme]
SHHHHHHHHHH
Do you have ANY idea what will happen if your fiance hears that??

[Lire]
MMMMFFFFFF!!

[Elesis]
............

Elesis is watching the sky at the window, ignoring the situation.

[Elesis]
*sigh*

[Kathy]
Hey Elesis, what are you doing?

[Elesis]
Hmm?
Nothing, just thinking about something...

Elesis sips her tea when suddenly-

[Kathy]
About Ryan?

[Elesis]
!
PFFFFFFTTTTTT!!
*cough**cough*

Elesis sprayed the tea out of the window.

[Kathy]
Oh I was right.

[Elesis]
Why- why I would think about that nut job!

[Kathy]
You're blushing.

[Elesis]
Tch.......
Ok fine I was thinking about him because his an idiot!

Elesis looks away and scratches her cheek

[Kathy]
You're not being honest you know...

[Elesis]
What do you mean by that?

[Kathy]
I mean you already confessed to him but you still hide the fact you love him just to look tough.

[Elesis]
Well yeah I got my reputation to take care o-...........
wait...
HOW THE HELL DID YOU KNOW THAT!!???

[Arme]
Will you quiet down over there?

[Lire]
MFFFFMMMMM!!!

[Elesis]
Sorry...

[Kathy]
I'm a girl too Elesis, i know that look of yours every time you look at him.

[Elesis]
Heh.....
Busted huh?

[Kathy]
not quite, everyone is oblivious about this kind of stuff, especially Lire.

[Elesis]
Wow........you're an expert on this stuff huh?

[Kathy]
Yes I am.
I'm an observer for my mother in the past, so i guess that ability to observe others is still stuck on me i guess.

*knock**knock*

[Kathy]
I'll go get the door.

Kathryne walks to the door and opens it.

[Amy]
HEY WE'RE FINALLY HERE!!!

Amy hugs Kathy.

[Mari]
Oh Amy, you're finally here.
Did you bring what I asked?

[Amy]
Yeap sure did.

Amy took out a hammer out of her purse.

[Arme]
Still using that bag?

[Amy]
HELL YEAH!
By the way, why you're shutting Lire's mouth, it looks like she's going to faint anytime soon.

[Arme]
Oh I forgot!

Arme took her hand off.

[Arme]
Ewwww, Lire you drooled all over my hand!

[Lire]
*cough**cough*
It's your *gasp* fault!
I was *gasp* dying back there........

[Mari]
Hey where's Seyren?

[Amy]
Probably at the buffet, Jin was hungry when they got here.
By the way what happen to Ryan?

[Lire/Elesis]
RYAN??!!
WHAT HAPPEN TO RYAN??!!

[Amy]
Nothing, it's just that he dressed up as a bodyguard today so I wondered what happen..

[Elesis]
Wait....

[Lire]
Bodyguard?

[Elesis]
I thought he left.........
I didn't know he'll stop by here first...

[Amy]
Really?
But he is totally here.
I can't be sure though since He's wearing a black mask.

[Arme]
Then how did you know it was him?

[Amy]
Hair.

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[Ryan]
*bzzt*
Delta 57 is in position, over.
This is Alpha 25, in position, over
This is Sierra 2, no targets inside, over.
This is Sierra 4, no targets on my scope either, over.

Ok guys keep on alert, we have to protect the 'Package' first, VIPs comes second.

[Radio]
Copy that.

[Ryan]
Man, why I have to be the bodyguard?

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[Scorch]
Ok mainly our group does assassination attempt on other countries, but next week it will be special, we have to guard a 'Package' from being killed.

[Ryan]
And that 'Package' is....?

[Scorch]
None other than Princess Lire herself.
She's getting married next week.

[Ryan]
*cough**cough*

[Scorch]
Dude are you ok?

[Ryan]
Yeah I'm fine, i think i just swallowed my spit.....

[Scorch]
......
Anyway we have to be ready, since you're a new member of our team, you'll be training with me personally.

[Ryan]
What kind?

[Scorch]
Weapon mastering.

[Ryan]
Weapon........mastering?
Wait how?

[Scorch]
Don't play dumb with me dude, everyone inside this room has the completed 'Third Eye' Magic.

[Ryan]
WHAT?!

[Scorch]
That's right, everyone in here are the veterans and the elites.
Anyway enough chit chat, let's go.

[Ryan]
Wait!
Before we start, what's my assignment?

[Scorch]
Bodyguard.
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[Ryan]
*sigh*

[Seyren]
Ryan?
Is that you?

[Ryan]
I beg your pardon?

[Seyren]
Hmm...
Sorry I guess i was mistaken.

Seyren walks past by Ryan when suddenly-

[Ryan]
Halt.
Please handover all your weapons and gears before you enter the chamber.

[Seyren]
Very well.

Seyren handover all his gears and weapons and suddenly he was forced to wear a bracelet.

[Seyren]
Hm?
What is this?

[Ryan]
A mana limiter bracelet.
It will limit your mana for a certain level, in this case, nothing.
So you won't be using any kind of magic while in the chamber.
And it can only be released by the one who put it.

[Seyren]
I see, i guess Lire is some important person to you guys.

[Ryan]
You may address her as 'Princess Lire' from now on.

[Seyren]
Prin....cess?

[Ryan]
You may enter the chamber.

[Seyren]
Oh, thank you.

Seyren enters.

[Radio]
*bzzt*
This is Sierra 1 to Ryan, over.

[Ryan]
This is Ryan, over.

[Radio]
We got some suspicious activities on the north side of the forest, request permission to check it and engage hostile if any, over.

[Ryan]
Negative on that, you need to stay put since your position is the best for sniper cover, send Charlie 568 for recon, over.

[Radio]
Roger that, sending Charlie 568 for recon, over and out.

[Ryan]
I guess it's time.

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[Priest]
We are here today.

[Lire]
Ermm can we skip it to the end or something?

[Ronald]
What's with the rush?

[Lire]
I just....need to see someone.....

[Ronald]
I see, he's here huh?

[Lire]
yeah...

[Priest]
You Ronald, would you like to take Lire as your lawful wedded wife, take care of her during sickness and health?

[Ronald]
I do.

[Priest]
You Lire, would you like to take Ronald as your lawful wedded husband, take care of him during sickness and health?

[Lire]
I-

[Author]
T/N notes:
I suck at this kind of stuff so send me some corrections if there's any, wait, THERE IS ANY.

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[Radio]
This is Charlie 568!
My wingman is down I repeat my wingman is dow-
*Bzzzzzzzzzttttttttt*

This is Sierra 8!
Engaging enemy hostil-
*BZZZZZZZZZZZZTTTTTTTTT*
Rag*Bzzzzzztttt*STORM!!!!!!

[Ryan]
SHIT!

Ryan slams the door frantically.

[Ryan]
STOP THE WEDDING!!!!

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[Ryan]
STOP THE WEDDING!!!

[Elesis]
What the?

[Ryan]
EVACUATE THE BUILDING NOW!
EVERY TEAM!
ORDER 55 HAS BEEN EXECUTED, I REPEAT.
ORDER 55 HAS BEEN EXECUTED!!!

[Elesis]
Wait order what?

[Jin]
We have to go now!
Ronan, Sieg, Dio, Seyren!
You're on me!
Elesis, Arme, Mari, Amy, Kathryne!
You take Lire somewhere safe!
MOVE OUT!

[Elesis]
Wait that the hell is going on???!!

[Arme]
No time!
LET'S GO!!

Everyone runs towards the emergency exits frantically.

[Ronan]
Well what now?

[Sieg]
We have to get everyone out of here first, that attack will literally obliterate this place if we're not quick enough.

[Seyren]
Is that what I think it is?

[Scorch]
Raging storm.

[Dio]
Mega version....

[Jin]
Nothing can stop that thing!!

[Ryan]
There is, but it's risky.

[Scorch]
Dude don't, you're not ready yet.

[Ryan]
That's why I'm ready.
Stand back guys!

Ryan took off his mask, revealing his scarred face.

[Ronan]
RYAN??!!

[Ryan]
Not now Ronan, if you want to kill me, DO IT AFTER THIS IS OVER!!

[Scorch]
Ok guys let's go, we have to leave NOW!

[Ronan]
Tch!

Everyone runs, leaving Ryan all alone to fend off the attack.

[Ryan]
I've been running away for so many times now, but i won't run away again this time.
So, don't take me for granted, DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[Assassin]
Heh, show me what can you do, little druid.

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[Ryan]
I'm born for blades, live for blades, fought for blades, and end for blades.
Withstood many pains to win a battle.
Many have I defeated, non have i retreated.
My life has always has been, for battles.

Ryan murmured that spell as if to activate something inside him.
The mighty arrow comes closer, ready to hit Ryan.
But he puts his right hand forward.

[Ryan]
Rho............AIUS!!!!

The true name revealed, shakes and freezes the air.

[Author]
LOL UBW RIPOFF!!!

The mighty arrow clashes with the shield of no loss.
It's very shock wave destroys everything, even the ground he stands on.

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*BOOM*

[Elesis]
What the?

[Ronan]
What the hell........

[Sieg]
He actually managed to stop the storm.........

[Dio]
The shield of no loss Aius.
I didn't know Ryan could actually use it....

[Ronan]
That's expected from a 'Third Eye' Magic user.

[Dio]
No that's not it.
That magic is a living thing to be precise, it chooses it's master by roaming from soul to soul until it found one.

[Ronan]
What?

[Sieg]
Heh, it's looks like Ryan is the chosen one for that shield.

[Jin]
No way....

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Ryan holds his ground, the mighty arrow is weakening by the second, but his shield hasn't lost a single layer.
But it's taking a huge toll onto his body.

[Ryan]
Nghh....
Dammit........

[Assassin]
Come on, I'm waiting little druid.

[Ryan]
You little!

Ryan summoned a lance with his left hand, and targets at his attacker.

[Ryan]
I won't let you get away with this!
GAE-

[Assassin]
BRING IT!!

[Ryan]
BOLG!!

The lance of sure hit, the demonic lance, the death spear.
Gae Bolg.

[Author]
What is this?
Ripoff day?

The lance hits the assassin, leaving a fatal wound, and the arrow disappeared.

[Ryan]
*pant**pant*
Man I'm getting dizzy......

[Lire]
.........!!

[Ryan]
ughh I think i heard something....

[Lire]
.....an!!

[Ryan]
Can you speak louder please?
I can't hear anything.....

[Lire]
Ryan!!

[Elesis]
RYAN!!!

Ryan falls to the ground.

[Elesis]
RYAN!!

[Lire]
Ryan stay with me!
It's going to be ok!!

[Ryan]
Hehheh, hey Elesis, Princess.........
That was some ride huh........
I'm think i'm going to sleep for a bit so.......yeah......

[Lire]
Ryan don't you dare close your eyes!!!!

[Elesis]
Ryan!

[Arme]
WE NEED A MEDIC OVER HERE!!

Ryan closes his eyes.

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The doctor came out of the room.

[Lire]
How is he doctor?

[Doctor]
It's hard to say, he already pushed his body over the limit, it's surprising that he managed to survive that attack directly, no that's an understatement, it's surprising that he even survived by using that kind of magic.

[Elesis]
But is he gonna be ok?

[Doctor]
Depends, if he still has the will to live, he will.
You may see him now.

[Lire]
Thank you doctor.

The team went in, checking up on Ryan, but-

[Elesis]
What the?
He's gone!

[Jin]
It looks like he jumped out of the window.

[Scorch]
If you're looking for him, try the cliff edge north from here.

[Elesis]
How did you know?

[Scorch]
It's his favorite spot ever since he came here.

[Elesis]
Come on Lire let's g-

[Arme]
Ermmm she already left....

[Elesis]
Tch.

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Lire ran, still in her wedding gown searching for Ryan.
She arrived at the cliff but there's no sign of him.
There's only her and a tree.
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[???]
What are you doing here Princess?

[Lire]
That voice?
Ryan??

[Ryan]
Up here Princess.

Ryan comes down from the tree.

[Lire]
Why?

[Ryan]
What do you mean?

[Lire]
Why you came back for me?

[Ryan]
I did made a promise remember?
I'll come to your wedding, one way or another.

[Lire]
The wedding is off since Ronald already left for his country.
So I guess-

[Ryan]
No, you're a princess and I'm an outcast, we're not meant for each other.

[Lire]
But that accusation is a false!
It's just by chance that you had that magic!

[Ryan]
True I was born with it.
But I'm still outcast because of it.
Many have died because of it.
I can't withstood the pain of losing you because of it as well.

[Lire]
But!

[Ryan]
No buts, by the way, come out Elesis, I know you're there.

Elesis comes out behind the tree.

[Elesis]
..............

[Lire]
Elesis......

[Ryan]
That was meant for you as well.
I can't withstood the pain of losing BOTH of you.
That's why I have to leave.

[Elesis]
I know........

Elesis looks at the ground.
Lire grabs her hand.

[Elesis]
?!

[Lire]
You're in love with him too huh?
Well that settled, finally I have some competition!

[Elesis]
Eh?
Wait you're not mad?

[Lire]
Why would I?
Ryan here is a charming guy so it was kind of surprising when I'm the only one who fell in love with him.
But since I know that you too are in love with him, i finally can have some match.
So I'm gonna beat you to the ground!

[Elesis]
?!
Fine.
BRING IT!
I WON'T LOSE TO YOU!!

Both of their eyes create sparks between them.
As if ready for a fierce battle.

[Ryan]
*sigh*
How did it turn out this way?

Ryan scratches his head and looks towards the sunrise.

[Ryan]
Well I guess that will happen if you fell in love with two girls huh?

[Author]
You're just greedy.

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The day ends with a new beginning.
A new trouble awaits this three in the future.
And a new adventure will begin for the whole team.
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[Sieg]
Well?

[Dio]
What you have to say for yourself?
Scorch?

[Scorch]
You can beat me IF you can, but I only did this so you guys can come back together.
Anyway here's the new info from Knight Master, Dark Anmon is making his move, so get back to the city ASAP for the final defense.
Everyone must be there.

[Dio]
What about you?

[Scorch]
I have to investigate something on Kastulle Ruins.
Knight Master is there too so I can't leave a girl all alone.

[Sieg]
Ok then, good luck.

Scorch leaves.

[Sieg]
Well Dio, it looks like we have another babysitting to do.

[Dio]
Yeah, come on let's go, we might miss dinner tonight.

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[???]
Heheheh, the Grand Chase are gone, even Knight Master herself are gone.
Leaving Bimersiah defenseless.
Prepare the army, we will march now!

[???]
Yes Master Anmon.

[Anmon]
They won't know what will hit them!.

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A new enemy emerges.
Dark Anmon, his motive, destroy the defenseless Bimersiah continent.
Will the Grand Chase team make it back, or will it be too late?
Find out in the next episode.
The Great Wall falls.

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---Episode 3.1---
Interlude

 Spoiler

2 days passed after the incident, Knight Master is now alone to gather the information about the Kastulle Ruins herself.

[Knight Master]
Dammit, of all times it HAS to be now?

And now she is surrounded by skeletons, live ones.

[Author]
Wait how skeletons can lived?

[Knight Master]
It's YOUR storyline and you're the one asking about it!?

[Author]
Hmmm good point....
BEHIND YOU!!!

[Mob]
SCREEEEEE!

[Knight Master]
WOAH!!

Knight Master dodge the attack and counter an instant.

[Knight Master]
DUDE DON'T BREAK THE THIRD WALL WILL YA??

[Author]
You mean fourth right?

[Knight Master]
WHATEVER!
RAAAH!!

Knight Master destroy another skeleton in front of her in a single blow.

[Knight Master]
Dammit where IS he??

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[???]
How far are we Aisha?

[Aisha]
We're not that far master, and I sense Knight Master is in danger, we must pick up the pace before it's too late.

[???]
Understood, Fixer!

[Fixer]
Whut?

[???]
I'm going ahead so take care of the exit for me!

[Fixer]
10-4, take care of yourself Scorch!

[Scorch]
Psh, who the hell did you think I am?

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Knight Master is surrounded, wounded and out of energy, it seems hopeless, but she still hasn't given up for some reason.

[Knight Master]
*pant**pant*
Dammit, where the hell are you?!

[Mob]
SCREEEEEE!

As the skeleton moves closer and about to give the final blow-

[???]
Death spike!

A pillar of swords suddenly arise from the ground, skewered the skeletons from beneath.
The figure lands.
Wearing a worn out leather hooded cloak, wearing black clothings with a black mask, golden hair as if only kings can have them, it was non other than-

[Knight Master]
You're late Scorch!

[Scorch]
Sorry, I had some trouble on the way here.

Knight Master stands up and suddenly whacked him at the back of the head.

[Knight Master]
Don't make a girl waiting!

[Scorch]
Owww...
Can we SERIOUSLY do NOT do it right now?
We're in the middle of a fight here!
Anyway did you get the data?

[Knight Master]
Yeah, everything is in here.

Knight Master took out some tablet out of pouch and give it to Scorch.

[Scorch]
Hmm.....strange...

[Knight Master]
What is it?

[Scorch]
This anomaly right here, it seems something tampered the original data 250 years ago.......
According to legend, this chamber hasn't been entered by anybody except 'him' 500 years ago.....

[Knight Master]
Errmm....Scorch......

[Scorch]
Curious.........very curious.......

Scorch ponders trying to solve an unsolved mystery and ignore the fact that there's a one eye cyclops behind him.

[Knight Master]
Ermmmm....Scorch.....

[Scorch]
Hmm oh sorry what is it?

[Knight Master]
ONE EYE CYCLOPS ON YOUR SIX!!!

Scorch turned and face the cyclops directly at the eye.

[Scorch]
.....................
Big..............but-

Scorch appeared behind it suddenly and a sword with whip like abilities surround the monster like a snake.

[Scorch]
Too weak.
Die in sorrow, suffer in pain, drown in agony.
The Endless Death.

The true name revealed and the snake binds the monster while it screams in pain.
The figure behind it was no longer 'Scorch' but someone else.
Wearing the same cloak, the same clothings and the same mask, but what makes them different were the hair, and the eyes.
The hair was white as snow, so pure and innocent that only an angel can have such features, gold and silver eyes as if only death can have them.
It was non other than-

[Knight Master]
What the?
No way............that weapon..........only one god can use that.........

[???]
Yeap, for now only the name 'Scorch' is allowed by me, but in due time, the true name and the ultimate power for this body will reveal itself.
So, keep it a secret will you?
Sarah?

[Knight Master/Sarah]
Cross.....what ARE you......

Cross himself.
The Fallen Death God.

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Interlude end.

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---Episode 4---
The Great Wall falls.

 Spoiler

2 Days passed since the incident at Eryuell island, the team is coming back to Bermesiah for their next assignment.
But they don't know that their next assignment may cost their lives....

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[Ronan]
Say Lire, why you're coming with us?
I thought your Grandfather disagree with this on you coming back.

[Lire]
Well I convinced him, besides i'm already old enough to leave the island.

[Ronan]
Old as in?

[Ryan]
Well for human terms, she's already 17.
For elves it's.........well..........i don't know...... 450 years?

Elesis who was about to eat her dumpling suddenly swallowed it.

[Elesis]
*cough**cough
Wait what?
You're going to date a 450 year old girl????

[Lire]
Well age doesn't matter when it comes to love....
Isn't that right sweetie?

Lire hugs Ryan by his left arm, making him blush.

[Ryan]
ermmm err....
Huh?

Elesis suddenly grabs him on his right arm.

[Elesis]
He's mine.

[Lire]
No he's mine!!

[Elesis]
He's MINE!

They made a tug of war out of Ryan.

[Ronan]
Dude, is this a funny scene or what?

[Jin]
That's what happen if you get greedy..

[Amy]
Well that what you expect to hear from SOMEONE who was drooling over another girl back there.

[Jin]
Ack!
You still...........remember that.......

Amy slams her foot and looks away.

[Amy]
OF COURSE I REMEMBER IT!

[Arme]
*sigh*
Couple's quarrel, been there.

[Ronan]
Done that.
Isn't that right, my precious jewel?

Ronan touched Arme by the chin, directing her gaze to his eyes.

[Arme]
Yes....my prince....

As their lips was about to touch-

[Elesis/Ryan/lire/Amy/Jin/Dio/Sieg/Mari]
EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWW GET A ROOM!!

They all scream in disgust in unison.
But the weird thing is-

[Ronan]
Oh sorry, got carried away....
But why Sieg and Dio joined in?

Yeah that...

[Sieg]
Well we saw what was going to happen, so-

[Dio]
-We might as well join the club.

Jin walks closer to Ronan and whispering.

[Jin]
Errmmmm dude......

[Ronan]
Whut?

[Jin]
Is it me or is it that those two are g-

As Jin was about to finish that sentence-

[Sieg]
Say........did you were just going to say gay?

[Dio]
Yeah I can't help but overhearing it....

Both of them suddenly appeared on Jin's face

[Jin]
Ermmm errr........ it was .....

[Ronan]
NOTHING, ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!

[Sieg/Dio]
Hmmmmmm

Both of them walked away

[Jin]
Phew.....

[Ronan]
S-scary.....

[Jin]
I literally almost pissed my pants.....

[Ronan]
YOU PISSED YOUR PANTS???

[Jin]
I said ALMOST!

[Mari]
By the way, where's Seyren and Kathryne?

[Elesis]
They went ahead, they said there's some problem they're going to fixed.

[Sieg]
Ok guys pack up, we're here.

The team packs up and went ahead and runs towards the front of the boat.
They're expecting a beautiful scenery of Bermesiah, but-

[Elesis]
Wha....

[Lire]
Impossible.........

[Sieg]
So it's begun.

All they saw was black smokes, raging flames and crumbled walls.
The Great Bermesiah wall has fallen, and the City of Serdin is under attack.

[Dio]
Ok ladies, me and the guys are moving ahead, meet us at Serdin central as soon you get off the boat.

[Mari]
Where are you guys going??

[Dio]
We need to investigate something at Serdin Castle, the Queen is our top priority.

[Ronan]
Dio can you send me to Kanavan?

[Dio]
Yeah I can.
I'll send you at the front gate.

[Ronan]
No send me directly into the Royal Chamber, I need to speak with the Queen immediately.

Dio stares at Ronan for awhile.

[Dio]
Ok fine, but be careful.

Dio opened two portals, one leading into Serdin, and one into the Kanavan Royal Chamber.

[Sieg]
Before you go.

Sieg put a bracelet onto Ronan.

[Ronan]
What is this?

[Sieg]
A return way point.

[Ronan]
A return........way point?

[Sieg]
It's a magical artifact that allows the user to come back to the one who put it.
It's a guardian bracelet, so when you're finished with your business, come back immediately.

[Ronan]
Right!

The team enters the portal, and the gateway was closed after that.
All that remains was the painful scenery.

[Elesis]
They're going to pay for this!

[Lire]
Calm down Elesis, we don't know what we're up against.

[Arme]
Yeah, as far as we know, it might be a coup d'etat.

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The wall falls, and the city is up in flames, the inevitable invasion has begun.
Will they stop it in time?
Or will they die before it's over?
Find out in the next episode.
The Corrupted Beings

Episode 5 and onwards.

 Spoiler

[♫SumiyoshiSS]

♦~INSANE PROLOGUE~♦
♣~INSANE S2 Episode 1~♣
♥~THIS IS AWESOME~♥
Where do you get this materials....
♠~stare~♠

[EternalSins]

Episode 2 is up

[auverin007]

Hey it`s KATHRYNE!

Originally Posted by EternalSins

It's Tuesday today, a routine training day for the team.
Seyren is sparring with Elesis.
Arme is with Mari.
Kathrine is with....well.........herself...

Even that i`m there, I didn`t talk.