First video edit i made

[lordord]

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[type.]

The edit is okay, I think. The story doesn't really make sense.
the guy is obv. driving somewhere – would be better to see him getting out of the car tho. Then he walks down that path. Suddenly there's a girl.. who is she and why is she there? And is he spying in her? Does feel a little bit like it when the video jumps back to the guy with his camera.. o:
The camera work could be a bit better aswell. It's not really stable.. ://
All in all it's a nice piece but there is definitely more potential to it. Keep it up! (:

[lordord]

Originally Posted by type.

The edit is okay, I think. The story doesn't really make sense.
the guy is obv. driving somewhere – would be better to see him getting out of the car tho. Then he walks down that path. Suddenly there's a girl.. who is she and why is she there? And is he spying in her? Does feel a little bit like it when the video jumps back to the guy with his camera.. o:
The camera work could be a bit better aswell. It's not really stable.. ://
All in all it's a nice piece but there is definitely more potential to it. Keep it up! (:

Thanks you so much !

I will try follow your advices

[type.]

Btw. (Not so) Secret trick: If you don't have a rig or sth similar for your cam you could just fill a shopping bag with something heavy and hold it together with the camera to get some nice stabilasation. (:

[lordord]

Originally Posted by type.

Btw. (Not so) Secret trick: If you don't have a rig or sth similar for your cam you could just fill a shopping bag with something heavy and hold it together with the camera to get some nice stabilasation. (:

Okey. Thanks !

[Captain]

1. Watch youtube videos
2. Clean youre Car
3. use effects like 2D

[alxstorm-trainer]

50 or 60 fps footage look like a game. I prefer 25 or 24fps. I like the motion blur.