Grand Chase Rewritten (Final Phase)

[EternalSins]

Hey guys, sorry for the freakin late update >.>
Anyway Episode 7 is out and there MIGHT be a catchup marathon tomorrow but can't promise you anything.
Enjoy!

[Match*Star.]

Originally Posted by EternalSins

Hey guys, sorry for the freakin late update >.>
Anyway Episode 7 is out and there MIGHT be a catchup marathon tomorrow but can't promise you anything.
Enjoy!

I'll be waiting.

[nubpwn3r]

correct me if im mistaken is this the korean manwha translated? kinda excited >:]]

[.Dean]

Awesomesauce comics man.

[ToraKun]

lawl
Tsundere Ending XD

[EternalSins]

Episode 8 until the limit of wordings and etc will be posted here, I'll put a link on the first post for this post.
(Confusing ain't it?)

Kinda, anyway answers to err nubpwn3r...
No this is a fan fic one and the manwha isn't fully translated yet or NO ONE want to translate it for some reason so it's a freaking letdown.....*sob*

Ok stop crying already alright?

But but...

NO BUTS!
To ToraKun, more like a yandere type ending lol.
Oh and there WILL BE some Jap type deal so enjoy!

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Episode 8:The Fearful One.
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 Spoiler

[Ryan]
God I'm bored....

[Ronan]
You're always bored...

[Lass]
How long are you gonna babysit her Ronan?
You know she'll wake up once it's done.

[Ronan]
Yeah but still....

[Dio]
But why you always stick with her anyway?

[Ley]
Probably a lolicon.

[Sieghart]
...........

[???]
Yo wassup guy- whoa what the hell happened here?

[???]
Damn, it looks like a typhoon just hit this place, or Rich is back which will never happen in another 5 years.

[Ryan]
Oh Jin, Amy, you're back.

[Jin/Amy]
WE'RE BACK!

[Lass]
How's the honeymoon guys?

[Jin]
I got nothin to say about that.

[Amy]
It was kinda up and down type deal, we don't wanna talk about it.
By the way, what happen?

[Sieghart]
Rich stop by and went havoc, but other than that it's all peechy with a sugar on top.

[Amy]
Someone is in a bad mood....
Girl trouble?

[Sieghart]
Why is everyone think I have girl trouble??!!!
Shessh!!

Seighart walks away and everyone stares at each other.

[Jin/Amy]
Yeap girl trouble.

[Jin]
Anyway back to the topic, why those three are sleeping?

[Ronan]
River of memories....

[Amy]
River of memories?

[Jin]
No way.....

Both of them stares at each other.

[Jin]
Pfff...
KUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
RIVER OF MEMORIES??
ARE YOU SERIOUS???
KUHAHAHAHAHA
OH GOD THIS GONNA BE A LAUGH RIOT!!

[Ryan]
What the hell?
Don't you know how serious this is???

Both of their expression changes.

[Amy]
Yeah it's gonna be serious when "HE" came that is.

[Jin]
Yeah, "HE" will probably come down from the sky like a fallen star and destroys those three until they are nothing.

Until-

[Amy]
Bwuahahahahaha!!
Nice one!!
Oh god my ribs!!
Kekekek hahahaha

[Jin]
Oh man...
Hey I got an idea!
You still got that camcorder with you sweetie?

[Amy]
!
Ooohhh you've read my mind honey...

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[Richard]
Ok looks like training is over, from today, you will be known as, the Immortal Guardians code name:Chrome.

[Eternal]
And you will be refer Richard, your master, as The Black Bishop.
As for me, The Destroyer.

[Cross]
And as for me, The Executor.

[Richard]
Once you're awake, there will be a coffin size box, filled with your new armor and weapons that you specialize in, but I hope you extend the type onto other weapons as well.

[Eternal]
Oh, and there will an instructor for you along your next journey to help you, his code name is The Star.

[Cross]
Brrr...
Hearing that name just give the creeps....

[Eternal]
I don't want to go through that again.....

[Elesis]
Ermmm question....
Who is Star exactly?

[Richard]
Let's just say he's gonna make your life a living hell.

[Astro]
*Gulp*

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[Amy]
Ok camcorder set.
Whenever you're ready director.

[Jin]
Annnnddddd ACTION!

[Ryan]
What the hell are you guys doing?

[Jin]
We're gonna make a new reality comedy spin off....
With this.......I can finally call this one......
The Greatest Art EVER MADE!!!
MWUAHAHAHAHAHA

[Dio]
He just lost it didn't he?

[Ley]
Yeap, totally lost it.

[Amy]
Well you don't know Star like we do so it's understandable you don't understand anything.

[Sieghart]
Did somebody say Star?

[Amy]
I did.

[Sieghart]
THE Star?

[Amy]
Yeah.

[Sieghart]
.....

[Ryan]
What's wrong Sieg?
You look kinda pale....

[Sieghart]
I don't want to go through that again....
Anyone but that.....

[Jin]
Well sorry Sieg but he's the one whose in charge of instructing whoever comes back from that place.

[Sieghart]
Please.....
Anything but that......

[Ley]
Is this Star person really that fearsome?

[Richard]
Well, that guy is the worse of the worse since he's the origin of all thing merciless.

[Ronan]
Rich!

Sieghart grabs him at the collar.

[Sieghart]
Please....
Anyone but him.....

[Richard]
Sorry but it's done, he'll arrive when those three wakes up.

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Who is this fearful person that scares even this fearless Gladiator?
Find out in the next Episode!
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Episode 9: Star's Arrival
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 Spoiler

[Elesis]
Dammit it's too tight on the chest!

[Astro]
Cuz that's mine you idiot!

[Elesis]
Who are you calling an idiot??

[Lire]
Ermm guys?

[Elesis/Astro]
What!?

Lire points at the guys.

[Ryan]
*Drools*

[Ronan]
God nosebleed again....

[Lass]
Perverts.

The girls shouts and kicks them out.

[Elesis]
I TOLD YOU NOT TO PEEP WHILE WE'RE CHANGING YOU PERVERTS!!!!

[Ronan]
It's Ryan's idea!!

[Elesis]
I DON'T CARE WHOSE IDEA WAS!!!!

[Astro]
My dream of becoming a bride is over......

[Lire]
Wait what?

[Richard]
*sigh*
Ok enough...
I'll talk with you three later, anyway get ready.
Star's coming.

As the team gathers, a loud bang can be heard.

[Lass]
What was that?

[Ronan]
Probably an enemy this time!

[Richard]
No that's Star, oh and you probably want to move a little bit to the left Ryan.

[Ryan]
Huh?

[Dio]
Too late.

[Ryan]
What?

Clouds of smoke went off right where Ryan was standing.

[Ronan]
*cough* *cough*
Ryan!!

[???]
Oowwww.....that was some rough landing.....

As the smoke clears out, a girl was sitting on Ryan's chest.

[Ryan]
Ughhhh....
So many Stars.....

[Richard]
Hi Star.

[Star]
Richy-Nii!!

Star ran and hugs Richard.

[Star]
Ne ne, can you do "that" again?

[Richard]
Right now?
Seriously?

[Star]
I haven't seen you in 15 years Nii-chan!
At least give me some reward for waiting that long!

[Richard]
Fine...

Richard grabs her and toss her in the air

[Star]
Yay!
Higher higher!

Everybody was dumbfounded.

[Ronan]
What the hell?

[Dio]
What's with this situation?

[Lass]
You mean like a brother and sister reunion?
Than yeah.

[Ryan]
So Richy...
I didn't know you were a Siscon.

[Star]
OOORRRYAAAA!!!

Star kicks Ryan at the chest.

[Ryan]
Gah!
What the hell was that for you b-

Star took out her knives and points it at Ryan's neck and crotch.

[Star]
And you were saying?

[Ryan]
I'm sorry!
Forgive me you excellency your highness the queen!
Just please spare my manlihood!
Anything but that!!

[Star]
Heheheheh, I think you forgot the "P" word punk!

[Ronan]
S-Scary......

[Dio]
Tyrant.....

[Ley]
So cool!

[Lass]
Huh?

[Ryan]
PLEASE!!!

[Star]
Better, but I think you just throw your manlihood out of the window since you peed your pants.

Star sheathed her knives.

[Ryan]
No I wasn't!

Star glares at him.

[Star]
Come again?

[Ryan]
I peed i peed in my pants!!!
Please spare me!!

[Star]
Good.

[Ronan]
I can see our future now.....

[Lass]
No wonder Sieg was scared like shit......

[Star]
Oh yeah.

Star turns and threw a dagger at a tree near Sieg.

[Sieg]
Eeekk!

[Star]
Where do you think you're goin Sieg?

[Sieg]
No-no where ma'am!

[Star]
Sheesh, you should at least greet your mother properly!

[Ryan]
M-mother!!??

[Ronan]
No freaking way....

[Lass]
Damn, that's just twisted.....

[Ley]
Teenage pregnancy......
THAT'S JUST TOO FREAKING COOL!!!

[Dio]
Wait what??

[Sieg]
Y-yes mother....

[Elesis]
..............

[Astro]
.................

[Lire]
.......................

[Star]
Ok where are the three that I'm going to instruct this time Nii-chan?

[Richard]
Elesis, Lire, Arme, step forward.

[Astro]
But my name is As-

[Star]
YOU'RE STICKING WITH ARME!!

[Arme]
Y-yes ma'am!!

[Star]
*sigh*
It looks like I have to start from the bottom up.
By the way which one do you fancy for Nii-chan?

[Elesis]
F-fancy?
I'm not his girlfriend!

[Star]
I didn't say it was you until you told me.

[Elesis]
Tch!

[Lire]
Way to go Elesis-san...

[Arme]
Ohhh you're screwed.

Star approaches Elesis.

[Star]
Hmmmm......

[Elesis]
Ermmm what you're doing?

[Star]
Examining.

She continues to examine Elesis until-

[Star]
Hmmmmm.
*touches breast*

[Elesis]
W-wha??

She touches her breast, everyone was shocked.
Ronan squirt out too much blood from his nose that he fainted.
Ryan drools too much that everyone doubts that he is either an elf or a wolf.
Lass was too shocked that his eyes bulges out.

[Elesis]
What are you doing!!!!!!????

[Star]
Damn that was pretty big.
Ok it settled then.
We're going to held a wedding ceremony today!

Ronan woke up.

[Ronan]
WHAT?????

[Ryan]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

[Lass]
I hate my life..........
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Star has arrived and many complicated things has happen.
What will happen next?
Find out in the next Episode!
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Episode 10:Exaggerated sparring.
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 Spoiler

[Star]
Put your back into it you lazy ass!!

[Elesis]
Grrrrr
RAAAHHH!!

[Lire]
Arme cover me!

[Arme]
You got it!!

Swords clashing, magic attacks and etc, just your normal typical training.

[Elesis]
TAKE THIS!!!

As Elesis sword struck the ground, it split the earth in half.

[Star]
Hah!
IS THAT ALL YOU GOT SPARTAN!!!??

[Ryan]
Aren't they going overboard with this?
It's like a real battle for crying out loud!

Well not for these guys anyway....

[Richard]
For the Chrome's, a life and death situation training is essential.
You can pass your limit in it.

[Arme]
*Pant* *Pant*
I can't go on....
My pool has already run dry....

[Star]
Ok then, let's stop for today.

[Elesis]
Screw that!
I can still go on!!

[Richard]
No that's enough, a mage is the foundation of teamwork, without it, the whole team goes down.
Besides this training is a bit early don't you think?

[Star]
Yeah they're lacking something.

[Richard]
*sigh*
No choice then.
Star, spar with me.

Star suddenly blushed.

[Star]
I-i can!?

[Richard]
Yeah but don't hold back.

[Star]
Of course not!

Lire, Arme and Elesis went back to the camp and watch at the sidelines as Richard and Star gathers at the training ground.

[Elesis]
Hey are they serious?

[Sieghart]
You're talking about Richard and my mother here....

[Star]
Now I want you three to watch this, you might learn something.

The wind howls, nothing but silence.

[Ronan]
Damn it's quiet...

[Dio]
They're just standing there...

[Ley]
What are they waiting for?

[Lass]
Probably waiting for something to break the tension like-

Lass snaps his fingers.
Then huge shockwaves and clouds explodes.

[Lass]
That...

[Elesis]
KYAA!!!

[Ryan]
Grab hold of something!

Everyone grab hold of Sieghart, who isn't affected by the sudden shocks.

[Sieg]
What am I a pole?

[Elesis]
The hell just happened?

[Dio]
I don't know, it went too fast..

[Star]
Rising sun!!!!

A pillar of fire went off.
Richard got out of it, unscathed.

[Richard]
Arterial Blast.

A huge black beam headed straight towards Star.

[Star]
Shit!
DRAGON'S SCALE!!

Star managed to deflect the beam upwards.

[Ronan]
The hell is this?

[Dio]
Are they seriously sparring?

[Ley]
This is more like they're going to kill each other!

[Lass]
It is.

Everyone was shocked and stares at Lass.

[Lass]
Richard already said it, a Life and Death situation can make you pass your limit.

[Elesis]
You mean, Richard and Star is going full power at each other?

[Sieg]
No, Richard can never go full power.

[Arme]
Why is that?

[Sieg]
Have you heard the tale of " The Xerxes Slayer "?

[Ronan]
Yeah I heard of it, the story where the God King Xerxes decided to come down to this realm in order to conquer it, he brought his whole army in countless numbers, almost endlessly.

[Lire]
And one lone man annihilate Xerxes's realm and their army on a single night.

[Ryan]
But what's that has gotta do with how powerful he is?
Wait a minute...

[Sieg]
Damn you're slow as always, HE is " The Xerxes Slayer ".
The Guardian Master goes by the title, Black Bishop.
And the other Guardian say he didn't even go full power at the time...

[Lass]
That's just too exaggerated Sieg, there's no way he can't go full power during all that.

[Sieg]
I don't know the facts and the proof to back it up since i wasn't even born, but we can ask him after this.

*boom*

[Star]
GAAHHH!!

[Richard]
You've gotten weaker these past few years, are you sure you didn't skip your daily workout?

Star staggers while she tries to get back on her feat.

[Elesis]
What the....

[Lire]
She didn't even scratch him.....

[Arme]
...........

[Star]
Keh!
Merciless as ever huh Nii-chan?
As expected to the one who destroyed Xerxes....

Everyone gasp in shock.

[Richard]
You HAD to bring that up?
Anyway we're done for today.
You're pretty beaten up.

As Richard turns his back.

[Star]
Your back is wide open!

Star rushes towards him, with her sword pointed on his neck everything was seem to be over-

[Elesis]
RICHARD!!!!

*stabs*

A stabbing sound, everyone closed their eyes, except for one man, didn't blink and rages take over him.

[Sieg]
DAMN YOUUUU!!!!
HOW DARE YOU DID THAT TO MY MOTHER!!!!

[Dio]
Sieghart don't!!!

Sieg charges in with all his might, he swings his sword, aims for his waist, but was stop by only one finger.
Explosion erupted towards the direction where he was swinging.

[Sieg]
!!?

[Dio]
Just one.....finger...?

[Ryan]
This is beyond strong........he's a monster.....

[Star]
Ahhhhh, got stabbed again.........
And you really went straight for the heart this time did you Nii-chan?

[Richard]
Well you were really bad at dying even if you tried, so I trusted you evade the attack, besides it's too early for you to go yet.

[Elesis]
Star!

[Lire]
Star-sensei!!

Everyone rushes in to help her.

[Richard]
Still with a bad short temper huh Sieg?

[Sieg]
Tch!

Sieghart sheathed his sword and runs towards Star.

[Sieg]
Mother!
Are you alright!?

[Star]
I'm fine~
I didn't know you were so worried about me huh siggy? <3

Sieghart blushes

[Sieg]
Please stop calling me that mother!

[Star]
Hehehehe~
Anyway what you three learned when we sparred.

[Elesis]
Truthfully, no.

[Lire]
It was trust wasn't it sensei?

[Star]
Yeap~!
That's what you've been lacking.
There will come a time when all of you have to face one another, so trust each other and you'll be fine!
Now let me go to sleep!
I'm tired~

*Grumbling*

Everyone turned silent.

[Elesis]
Err sensei, that wasn't you right?

[Star]
Sorry I was a bit hungry ,heheheh~ XP

Everyone burst to laughter.

[Richard]
Well since everyone is tired, I might as well start cooking.

[Ryan]
Wait....you cook?

[Ronan]
We're going to die....

[Star]
Yay Onii-Chan is going to cook for us!
Ne ne, cook my favorite ones okay~?

[Dio]
We're so dead....
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That was some sparring, but in the end everything turned out good.
Or is it?
Tune in for the next episode!
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Episode 11:Sincerity.
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 Spoiler

[Richard]
Ok dinner's ready!

Outside.....

[Lass]
Ok guys take your pills, it's gonna get nasty when we're inside.

Everyone shouts " Yes commander! "

[Star]
Say why we eating this pill again?

[Sieg]
To counteract the symptoms...

[Star]
Ooohhhh...

[Ley]
Ermmm, is Richard's cooking is REALLY that bad?

[Dio]
Bad is an understatement....

[Lass]
Ok first wave go!

Ronan, Ryan and Dio went in first.

[Lass]
Ok what's the situation inside Orange?

[Ryan]
..............

[Lass]
Orange!!?

[Ryan]
...............

[Lass]
Tch.....we......we lost orange......

[Elesis]
NOOOOOO!!!!!!

[Star]
I don't know what play are you guys doin but it's fun!!
I'm going in first!!

[Lass]
S-sensei!
No!!

Star went in, silence follows.

[Lass]
SENSEI!!!

Lass keeps shouting for the last 2 minutes, until Lire stopped him.

[Lire]
That's enough commander.....
She's gone......

[Lass]
*sob* *sob*
Sensei......

[Ley]
Why are you guys acting like she died in the battlefield like during Operation Om*ha in W*rld W*r II?

[Sieg]
Everyday is a battlefield, even during dinner.

[Ley]
But you guys were hogging everything like you were starved for three weeks 2 days ago!

[Sieg]
That was different! :D

[Ley]
Saying that with a straight face.... -_-;

Richard went out suddenly.

[Richard]
Get in already!
The foods getting cold!! D:<

Everybody reluctantly went in, and what they saw was-

[Lire]
What the....

[Elesis]
Roast chicken with BBQ sauce, Chinese Style Fried Rice, and Miso soup!?

[Ley]
The combos are bad but they're delicious!
Better than my cooking dammit!!

[Elesis]
Ley spit it out!!

[Ley]
Geez you're annoying...
HERE!

Ley stuffed Elesis with the rice she just ate.

[Elesis]
............

[Arme]
ELESIS NO!!!!

[Elesis]
*chew* *chew*
*Gulp*
...............
It's...........good.......

[Ley]
See, I told ya.

[Sieg]
Seriously?

Everyone took their seats and starts eating.

[Ronan]
It's............it's..........too good.....

[Ryan]
God this is too delicious!
No!
Delicious can't even compare to this!!

[Richard]
Geez, what did you think I was trying to do?
Kill you?

[Sieg]
Well you almost did seven years ago.
I mean your cooking was really bad at the time that it killed the surrounding forest.....

[Richard]
Oh you mean Ryan's?

[Elesis]
Huh?

[Richard]
That was Ryan's seven years ago.

Everyone stares at Ryan.

[Ryan]
Heheheh, my bad.... :D

[Elesis]
DAMMIT RYAN I THOUGHT IT WAS RICHARD'S FAULT THAT I HAD DIARRHEA!!!!

Silence follows.....

[Elesis]
Errr.....

[Richard]
Ok let's just pretend you guys didn't heard that and keep on eating, I'll be at the kitchen preparing desert.

Everyone eats silently.....

[Star]
*Burp*
Ahhhh, that really hit the spot, ne Nii-chan!
What's for desert?!

[Richard]
It's your favorite.

Star's eyes went sparkle and shout in happiness.

[All]
She's too carefree.....

As everyone finish eating-

[Richard]
Ok desert is ready.

[Elesis]
Woah!

[Ronan]
A Triple Dipped Sundae Parfait!?

[Richard]
Ok dig in.

[Ronan]
Why don't you join Rich?
You haven't eaten anything..

[Richard]
I'm going to pass.

[Lass]
Come on eat up, you'll be happy if you eat with all of us.

[Richard]
Nah, seeing you guys eat is much happier. :)

The girls suddenly blushed.

[Ronan]
Why your face is red guys?

[Elesis/Arme/Lire/Ley/Star]
I-It's nothing!

The girls looked away.

[Richard]
Ok I'll wait outside, just leave the dishes as they are, I'll clean up afterwards.

Richard went outside.

[Lass]
Hmmm.

Lass stood up.

[Ronan]
Wait where are you going Lass?

[Lass]
Just a little walk outside.

Lass went out.

[Ryan]
Does that mean he isn't going to finish his?

[Ronan]
Wait you're finished already? O_o;
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[Lass]
So smoking huh?

[Richard]
Yeah, what about it?

Lass stand beside him.

[Lass]
You've already lost the sense of hunger and taste huh?

[Richard]
I know you were perceptive, but i didn't know it was that good.

[Lass]
*sigh*
How much time do you have?

[Richard]
Not long, but man....
I wish i can see Elesis to be strong and beautiful before i leave this world...

[Lass]
Why not just tell her then?

[Richard]
Nah, she's better off not knowing this.
Oh and when I'm gone, take good care of everyone.

[Lass]
Heh, you better tell that to Elesis, she's a better leader than most of us can put together.

[Richard]
Yeah, you're right..
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[Elesis]
*clenches fist*
Tch....
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It was a fun and rowdy dinner
But even so, the truth about Richard's condition has come to light.
Will Elesis overcome this?
Find out in the next episode!
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Episode 12:Sudden Confession, reverse proposal, and..............marriage!? (Three part special)
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 Spoiler

[Part 1]

Ahhh, the beautiful sunrise, so tranquil and peaceful....

[Elesis]
RAAAHHH!!!

[Star]
Hah!
You two hundred years too early to put a scratch on me!!

Well, that's what it was suppose to be.....

[Ryan]
*yawn*
Why Elesis didn't stop training again?

[Arme]
She said about surpass and protecting somebody....
I think....

[Ryan]
So why you don't join them then?

[Arme]
I got a date with Ronan today!

[Ryan]
Right....the long awaited " date "....

[Ronan]
Sorry for waiting Arme~
I didn't know which clothes should i wear today XP

[Ryan]
Wow nice intro.....
Well I'm gonna leave you two lovebirds alone..

Ryan walks away.

[Ronan]
What's with him?

[Arme]
He's just pissed that he's the only one that doesn't have a girlfriend yet.

[Ronan]
Right..
Well let's go.

[Arme]
Ok~
Later guys!

[Ley]
Have fun you two!

[Ryan]
Yeah have fun you two~~
Ungrateful bastard....

The two of them walks away.

[Lass]
You looked pissed off for some reason.

[Ryan]
I'M NOT PISSED!!

[Lass]
Suit yourself then.

[Ryan]
Grrrrrr
Go all lovey dovey with your cute little Arme~
Yeah right if wasn't for me you won't be getting her!

Sieghart walks in front of Ryan

[Sieg]
You looked pretty pissed Ryan.

[Ryan]
I SAID I'M NOT PISSED!!!
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[Richard]
They're pretty lively over there.

[Lire]
Heheh.
Anyway can you help on my aiming skills, master~

[Richard]
Yeah sure.
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[Elesis]
Grrrr
Damn you Lire....

[Star]
Where the hell are you looking at!!??

[Elesis]
Get off my back you old hag!!!

[Star]
Why you little!!

[Elesis]
RAAAHHH!!!
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[Dio]
Everyone seems pissed huh?

[Ley]
Yeah what's up with that?
Are we the only ones that's not pissed?

[Dio]
I think so.
Oh by the way, checkmate.

[Ley]
No way!
That's the second time you won!
You totally cheated!

[Dio]
No I didn't!
Don't blame anyone when you suck at this!!!

[Ley]
GRRRRRR!
I declare a rematch!!!

[Dio]
FINE!!!
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[Sieg]
I know it's a hot day but this is just too much...

[Lass]
Well I don't really care..

Silence follows...

[Lass]
Casino?

[Sieg]
Game.

The two of them walks away.
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The same routine continues for another 6 hours.

[Elesis]
*pant**pant*
You're sweating like fountain huh you old hag?

[Star]
Heh, right back at ya!
But it's amazing that she can keep up with me this time...
What's driving her?

[Richard]
Ok that's enough training for today.

[Elesis]
Heh, don't underestimate me Rich!
I can still go on!

Richard suddenly lift and carries her like a princess.
Everyone was shocked by the sudden scene.

[Richard]
Yeah right, you're trembling like hell.
You haven't got any strength left.

[Elesis]
Wha-what are you doing!!
Put me down you idiot!!!
It's embarrassing!!!

[Richard]
Ain't gonna happen.

Richard carries her into the tent.

[Dio]
.............

[Ley]
Why you can't be like Richard?

[Dio]
Wait what?

[Star]
Dammit, I envy her~!
I want to be carried like a princess too~!
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Richard puts her on the bed.

[Richard]
There, rest up and get yourself cleaned afterwards.

As he almost walks out of the tent.

[Elesis]
Wait Rich.

[Richard]
What is it?

[Elesis]
There's something that I want to ask you...

[Richard]
Then talk.

[Elesis]
C-closed the tent first..

[Richard]
Is it something private?

[Elesis]
Y-yeah..

Richard closes the tent.
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[Ryan]
What are they up to?

[Dio]
Probably about to do something ecchi....

[Lire]
Nah it can't be, even though Elesis has been eyeing on him today there's no way they can-

Silence.....

[Star]
Let's go!
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[Richard]
Ok I put up a barrier so no one can hear us talking.

[Elesis]
I.....i heard what you talked about with Lass the other night...

[Richard]
.......
*sigh*
How much did you hear?

[Elesis]
Pretty much all of it.

[Richard]
*sigh*
I was about to keep you in the dark since i don't want to get you worried.

[Elesis]
But how could you!?
Why you always shoulder everything by yourself!?
Even though you always get hurt you always keep it to yourself!
Why you won't let me be part of your world?

[Richard]
I got my reasons.
Even though I got hurt a lot, by not involving you is enough for me.
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[Ryan]
Dammit I can't hear anything!

[Ronan]
Ermm what are you guys doing?

[Star]
We're just going to find out if Nii-chan and Elesis-chan are doing ecchi stuff or not~!

[Lass]
Wait what?

[Sieg]
That sounds pretty dirty mother....

[Star]
Well I can't help it!

[Dio]
But why we can't hear a damn thing!?

[Arme]
Well that's because there's a barrier.

[Ley]
Can you dispel it?

[Arme]
I can but it'll take a minute.

[Lire]
Do it!
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[Elesis]
But why you even do that?

[Richard]
I-i can't tell you.

[Elesis]
Why?

[Richard]
I can't tell you!

[Elesis]
WHY!?

Richard grabs her.

[Richard]
Because I'm not ready yet!

[Elesis]
??!

[Richard]
Because I'm not ready to lose you............not yet......
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[Lire]
Is it done Arme?

[Arme]
Just a bit more!
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[Elesis]
..........
Then I'm going to ask you....
What do you see when you look at me?

[Richard]
Huh?

[Elesis]
What do you see?

[Richard]
I see you as a little sister of course..

[Elesis]
Then from now on, I want you to see me differently...
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[Ley]
Are you done Arme?

[Arme]
Almost....there...
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[Richard]
Huh?
What are you talking about?

[Elesis]
Instead of being your little sister, I-i w-w-want y-y-you t-t-to...
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[Ryan]
ARME!!

[Arme]
DONE!
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[Elesis]
I want you to see me as your lover, your wife!!

[Richard]
Wha-wha?
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[Ryan]
No way...

[Ley]
She finally confessed to him!?

[Arme]
Now that was a surprise....

[Lire]
A reversed marriage proposal!? O_O

[Ronan]
Oh god...

[Lass]
I hate my life....

[Ryan]
NOOOOOOO!!!!!

[Sieghart]
Ok this too much news for me....
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To be continued in part 2.
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[Part 2]

 Spoiler

[Richard]
........
I don't know what to say Elesis......

[Elesis]
Say y-yes...

[Richard]
I was going to say ain't gonna happen but what you said changes everything.... ._.;

[Elesis]
D-dummy!

[Richard]
*sigh*
I hate to say this but let me think about it first....
I need to err....clear my thoughts....

[Elesis]
Ok...
I'll wait for your answer tonight...

[Richard]
Errr.....yeah....
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[Star]
Damn!
He's coming!
Everyone act natural!
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Richard walks out of the tent.

[Arme]
Wow that was a really fun day huh?(monotone)

[Ronan]
Yeah it SUUUURRREEE was!(monotone)

Ronan and Arme walk pass by Richard awkwardly.

[Richard]
.....
Hmmmm....

[Ley]
Damn, I lose again!
Dammit I hate this.(monotone)

[Dio]
Well too bad you suck at it.
Hahaha.(monotone)

[Lire]
Damn I missed again.(monotone)

[Ryan]
Haha, too bad Richard isn't here to help you right now.
Haha.(monotone)

[Star]
Nii-chan~!

Star runs and hugs Richard from behind.

[Richard]
Oh hey there Star.

[Star]
You dummy~!
Why you didn't carry me like a princess like you always do~?!

[All]
Dammit she's good!

[Richard]
Well you can still walk, so there's no particular reason whatsoever for me to carry you.

[Star]
Or you just want to do ecchi things with her right~?

[Richard]
Ain't gonna happen in a million years.

[All]
Wow, saying that with such a straight face! O_o;

[Star]
Anyway what's for dinner tonight~?

[Richard]
Well it's Lire's turn to cook tonight.
Oh and I won't be coming for dinner.

[Star]
Ehhh~?
Why's that?
You've got nowhere to run!
With this I can squeeze the truth out of ya!

[Ryan]
Yeah just tell us that you're marrying Elesis!

[Ronan]
Oh you're cornered now!

[Richard]
I have to think about some private matters that does not concern you for the time being and i will not tell you even if you squeeze the truth out of me.

[All]
He can read minds now!? O_O;

Owned.

Lawl.

[Star]
Ok then~! XD

Richard walks away.

[Star]
BAH!
HE'S TOO GOOD!!

[Sieg]
He's tough to crack like always....

[Lass]
I'll go talk to him.

[Star]
Well you can never make him tell the truth!

[Lass]
Heh.
We'll see about that.
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[Richard]
*sigh*
Ahhhhh dammit!
How the hell I'm going to answer!?

[Lass]
Well just tell her how you feel.

[Richard]
L-Lass!
When the hell did you get here?!

[Lass]
...........
Damn your head is pretty messed up....

[Richard]
*sigh*
So you heard huh?

[Lass]
Well if regarding the confession AND the proposal then yeah.

[Richard]
What I'm going to tell her Lass?
I mean i know we got mutual feelings for each other but isn't it to soon for us?

[Lass]
Heh.
Dude.

Lass touches his shoulder.

[Lass]
Nothing is too soon for love.

[Richard]
How you can say that?
You've never been into a situation like this before.

[Lass]
True.
I'm just an observer watching from the sidelines, so i'm going to tell you on my point of view.
Love is like a rolling stone on a cliff edge.
If you don't catch it, it will eventually rolls down and falls.
I mean come on, you're perfect for each other, sure you guys always argue a lot because mainly you always tease her.
But when it comes to being together, there's no other one suitable for you.

After that Richard ponders a lot.

[Richard]
*sigh*
You're right, but what I have to say?
I'm bad at using words....
All I can do is just be myself...

[Lass]
Then be yourself.
That's the guy she fallen for right?

[Richard]
.........
Right, I've decided, i'll give her the answer tonight.

[Lass]
Now that's the Richard I knew.
Come on, Lire needs help on her aiming again.

[Richard]
Sure.

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Later that night, during dinner.
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[Ronan]
Psst, Lass.

[Lass]
What?

[Ronan]
How did it go?

[Lass]
What do you mean?

[Star]
The confession?
Did you get the truth out of him?!

[Lass]
Yeah of course I did.
Why you asked?

[Ryan]
Dammit how the hell did you do it?

[Star]
Yeah even I can't squeeze the truth out of him!

[Lass]
I just ask for the truth, that's all.

[Star]
Eh?

[Ryan]
He didn't lie or use wordplay on you?

[Lass]
Nope.

[Ronan]
Bullshit.

[Lass]
If you want to know the truth then just ask for it.
If you use wordplay then he's going to answer in the same way.
Now leave me alone, I want to eat my dinner in peace.

[Star]
I still don't buy it though...

Richard walks in.

[Richard]
Elesis, can I talk with you for a sec?

[Elesis]
Y-yeah sure...

Richard and Elesis walks out.

[Star]
Ok guys, positions!!
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[Elesis]
So what's your answ-

Richard suddenly put his hand on her mouth.

[Richard]
Let me talk first.
You're a stubborn, rebellious, hardheaded, and a dense girl.
You always refuse my order from the start and always go head on even if I told you not too.
Even though I tell you the simplest thing you always get it wrong.

Elesis looks on the ground.
Ready to burst into tears.

[Richard]
But even so you a kindhearted girl that always put everyone ahead of her.
That's what I like about you..

[Elesis]
!?

[Richard]
And I hate to admit it but, your downside can make you cute too.

[Elesis]
Wha-what are you sayi-

Then he kissed her, a deep passionate kiss.

[Richard]
What I'm saying is yes.
I know it's late but-

He kneels on one knee and took out a ring.

[Richard]
Elesis Sieghart, will you marry me?
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To be continued in part 3
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[Part 3]

 Spoiler

Ok let's revise what's been going on lately shall we?
During last night dinner Lass found out about Richard's condition, on so does Elesis.
The next morning, Elesis continues training alone even though it was their day off, trying to get stronger in order to protect Richard.
After a few hours of training Richard carries her on to the tent to let her get some rest, and during that moment Elesis finally confess and propose to him(Which is weird because the guy is the one whose get to propose)
And of course everyone knew about it.
One thing led to another and it's time to arrive to the conclusion, what will be Elesis's answer?
Let's find out!
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Richard stand up and slides the ring unto her finger.

[Richard]
Well, what's your answer?

Elesis knocks his head lightly

[Elesis]
Dummy....
I already gave you my answer this morning...

[Richard]
Right...
Forgot...
*chuckle*

[Elesis]
Wh-what's so funny?

[Richard]
Well your tsundere side was actually kinda cute~

[Elesis]
Y-you idiot!
You're embarrassing me!

[Richard]
*chuckle*
Well let's get back inside.

[Elesis]
Ok!

The walk back towards the tent while holding hands.
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[Star]
Ok guys here they come!

[Lire]
Ok just like we practice!

Richard and Elesis walks into the tent and suddenly-

[All]
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Confetti pops and everyone was wearing a birthday hat.

[Richard]
What the?

[Elesis]
What the hell is going on?

[Ryan]
Well we're gonna celebrate on your marriage proposal!!

[Richard]
Lass!
You told them!?

[Lass]
They knew from the start so there's no point on telling them anyway.

[Star]
Don't you think you can hide anything from us Nii-chan!!
Anyway since this a happy occasion, let's all get drunk!!

[Ronan]
I'm game!

[Ryan]
Booze for the win!!

[Dio]
Well everything is a first today so might as well join the party.

[Lire]
Wait wait!

Lire suddenly runs towards Elesis and grabs her hand.

[Elesis]
Wha-wha?

[Lire]
Oh my god so beautiful!

[Arme]
What what what what?

Lire lifts Elesis's hand.

[Ley]
wow...

[Arme]
A ruby ring!

Then suddenly all the girls runs towards Elesis to check out the ring.

[Sieg]
There they go again...

[Ronan]
Girly mode....

[Ryan]
Well I don't freaking care!
Let's just enjoy this moment!

The party went on for several hours until everyone was asleep in drunken state.
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Richard walks out of the tent.

[Richard]
*sigh*
Damn that was a rowdy night.

[???]
It sure is, don't you think, Black Bishop?

[Richard]
What do you want this time?
Xerxes?

[Xerxes]
Heh.
You know what I want.
Let's end it here.

Richard look towards the tent behind him.

[Richard]
Not here.
Follow me.

[Xerxes]
Hmph, still have a soft spot for the humans, even though they're the ones who forsaken you a long time ago.

Richard starts walking.

[Richard]
Even though I've already fallen, that doesn't mean my duty as the " God of Salvation " has ended.
Now you're coming or what?

[Xerxes]
Certainly.
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Richard and Elesis finally accepted each other, and it seems it will be a bright future.
But with the sudden appearance of the fallen God King Xerxes, will there be a bright future to begin with?
Find out in the next episode!
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Episode 13:Confrontation.
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 Spoiler

[Xerxes]
Ground Zero!!

[Richard]
Fiction!!

*boom*

Loud explosions can be heard, sword clashes, blood spatters unto the ground.

[Xerxes]
*pant* *pant*
Come on, show your power like last time!

[Richard]
*pant* *pant*
Ain't gonna happen.

[Xerxes]
RAAAHH!!!

[Richard]
Bring it asshole!!!

The final confrontation, has already begun.
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[Elesis]
Ughhh....ow my head.....

Elesis was the first one to woke up.

[Lire]
Damn that was some night....

[Arme]
But I can't believe Elesis had low tolerance for alcohol...

Followed by Lire and Arme.

[Elesis]
S-shut up!
I never drank before!

[Arme]
Riiiiiiigggghhhtttt....

[Lire]
*chuckle*
But still I can't believe Elesis-san was going to get married first though....

[Arme]
Well it pains me to admit it but it looks like you won the bet...

[Elesis]
Yeah, I guess so.
By the way, where's Richard?

[Arme]
I don't know, he went out for while but he never came back last night.

[Elesis]
?!

[Lire]
Is something the matter Elesis-san?

[Elesis]
I don't know, but something isn't feel right....
I'm going to look for him!

Elesis stood up and walks out.

[Lire]
Wait!
Elesis-san!

[Arme]
Mehh what the heck...

Followed by Lire and Arme.

[Star]
..........
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[Elesis]
Where is he?

[Arme]
He probably went out to get some groceries or something.
So don't worry abo-

Multiple fire pillars suddenly burst into the horizon.

[Arme]
Wha-what the?

[Lire]
What was that!?

[Elesis]
...
No...

Elesis starts running towards it.

[Lire]
Elesis-san wait!!!
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[Richard]
*pant* *pant*
*cough* *cough* *cough*

[Xerxes]
Heh, you've gotten far weaker haven't you?

[Richard]
This is *gasp* nothing.....
*cough* *cough*

[Xerxes]
Well I might as kill you right now.
Since you were really hard to kill the last time, I wonder it was the same this time.
But I guess i was wrong, any last words?
Black Bishop?

[Richard]
Leave them alone, they have nothing to do with this.....

[Xerxes]
Of course.

Xerxes raise his sword-

[Richard]
I'm sorry Elesis...
I guess i can't stay by your side after all.....

He swings it down with all his might-

[Richard]
Goodbye...

The sword drew closer-

[Richard]
Elesis...

*thud*

*slash*

[Richard]
?!

[Xerxes]
What!!?

*bang*

Xerxes doges and jumps away.

[Arme]
Elesis!!

[Lire]
Elesis-san!!

Lire and Arme runs towards her.

[Arme]
Damn the wound is too deep!
Lire call the others!!

Lire runs towards the camp with all her might.

[Richard]
Elesis.....

Richard stood up.

[Richard]
Why....
Why did you

[Elesis]
*cough* *cough*
I already told you.....
Since I will be by your side....
You won't have to shoulder everything yourself anymore...
*cough**cough*

[Richard]
......
I understand....

[Elesis]
Now you don't need to *gasp* worry about me...
Go get him...
*cough**cough*

[Arme]
That's enough Elesis!

Richard face towards Xerxes, and stands in front of him, with Arme and Elesis at his back, acting as a shield.

[Xerxes]
Heh, sorry about breaking our promise Richard but I have to wrap things up.

Xerxes points his arm at Richard.

[Arme]
That stance!

[Xerxes]
Reality Breaker.

A huge beam of light burst out and headed towards them at a fast rate.

[Arme]
RICHARD!!!!

[Richard]
Pathetic fool.

The beam of light hits.

[Xeres]
Hahahaahaha!!
DIE!!!!!!!

The attack continues for several minutes until-

[Richard]
Are you done yet?

[Xerxes]
WHAT!?

Richard, stand firm blocks the attack with a mere gaze.

[Arme]
Impossible......
To block that kind of attack on that scale...
With a mere gaze!?

[Richard]
I have enough of this.

Richard deflects the beam with the back of his hand.

[Xerxes]
Wha...wha....
WHAT ARE YOU!!??

Eternal and Cross suddenly appears.

[Eternal]
He was a fallen God of Salvation.
Then became the Black Bishop.

[Cross]
Even so, he has two title to begin with.
And that is-

Their skins sheds away, nothing were left but bones, and their clothing became a hooded shroud.
Covering everything except for the hands and face.

[Richard/Cross/Eternal]
THE DEATH GODS.
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The final battle begins, fighting with his true form, The Death Gods emerges.
What will be the outcome of this final battle?
Stay tune for the conclusion in the next episode!
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Episode 14 and etc

 Spoiler

[.Mini]

Pffft...I'm not waiting for the next episode..-Lies-

The suspense is as great as always Rich.

[EternalSins]

Ermmm not on topic and certainly not the correct language for this section.....
Oh and also spam advertisement, so that makes about 1 warning and 2 infractions on mods point of view ._.

Requesting one infra for this guy!
Reported.

Dude you being too harsh this days....

I DUN FREAKIN CARE!!!
ANYONE VIOLATES DA RULEZ WILL BE PUNISHED!!!!!
MWUAHAHAHAHAHA

.....Tyrant......

[ToraKun]

@Rich lol i mistook tsundere for yandere XD
anyways ep8..... *reading my eyes out*

-EDIT-
lol the 3 will soon get it from whoever that guy is XD

[.Celtics]

nc comics rich!
cant wait for the next one.. star!

and ban requested for that guy

[Taec]

Sorry for the late reply...
Ok takecare richy, will be here for the next update

[Mαrrα]

Very nice comics.

[EternalSins]

is out!
I think it was pretty short and the worst episode i made since i didn't have any ideas.

But it's gonna be a laugh riot though XDD

[Mαrrα]

Originally Posted by EternalSins

is out!
I think it was pretty short and the worst episode i made since i didn't have any ideas.

But it's gonna be a laugh riot though XDD

Thanks for the update.

[.Mini]

Originally Posted by Mαrrα

Thanks for the update.

Would you be so kind as to stop spamming the GrandChase section? All of your posts i've seen are thanks for this and This is nice. You haven't pressed thanks once or even made a full, reasonable post.