First video edit i made

The edit is okay, I think. The story doesn't really make sense.
the guy is obv. driving somewhere – would be better to see him getting out of the car tho. Then he walks down that path. Suddenly there's a girl.. who is she and why is she there? And is he spying in her? Does feel a little bit like it when the video jumps back to the guy with his camera.. o:
The camera work could be a bit better aswell. It's not really stable.. ://
All in all it's a nice piece but there is definitely more potential to it. Keep it up! (:

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Originally Posted by type. The edit is okay, I think. The story doesn't really make sense. the guy is obv. driving somewhere – would be better to see him getting out of the car tho. Then he walks down that path. Suddenly there's a girl.. who is she and why is she there? And is he spying in her? Does feel a little bit like it when the video jumps back to the guy with his camera.. o: The camera work could be a bit better aswell. It's not really stable.. :// All in all it's a nice piece but there is definitely more potential to it. Keep it up! (:

Thanks you so much !

I will try follow your advices

Btw. (Not so) Secret trick: If you don't have a rig or sth similar for your cam you could just fill a shopping bag with something heavy and hold it together with the camera to get some nice stabilasation. (:

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Originally Posted by type. Btw. (Not so) Secret trick: If you don't have a rig or sth similar for your cam you could just fill a shopping bag with something heavy and hold it together with the camera to get some nice stabilasation. (:

Okey. Thanks !

1. Watch youtube videos
2. Clean youre Car
3. use effects like 2D

50 or 60 fps footage look like a game. I prefer 25 or 24fps. I like the motion blur.