Heart Pierce

11/25/2008 06:51 m00r3d00m#1
Its not actually art work but I wrote alot of poems like that because I was deeply in love or heart broken or just in a bad mood.I write only when I feel.
Here it is:

First Confession

When i shut my eyes i can touch the sky!
When i forget you i will die…
When i think about you i am on the 7th sky!
But you cut my wings and i cannot fly…
Why you give me only pain?
When tomorrow I will be the same…
Why don’t you answer my love?
Because i feel like a white dove.
Why don’t you see my tears?
That I’ve cryed all these years!
Inside my heart is fire burning…
Burning for you and you are not returning…
The world is turning…
And now i am learning…
The sun shines and the day starts…
And we are now two different parts…
Who will stop my pain?
And save me from her Game…
11/27/2008 08:47 m00r3d00m#2
I guess nobody likes it...
11/27/2008 09:55 mazoku#3
nice . and i guess not many saw it yet.


11/28/2008 02:57 n8wing#4
wow thats i beautiful text ;)
11/28/2008 09:22 m00r3d00m#5
Well it was up for 4 days untill I got a reply.
I got more of these if you guys are interested.
11/28/2008 21:53 d'Jew#6
Trick or treat , smell my feet , give me something good to eat ! xD

very nice poem . my girlfriend loved it ^^