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Originally Posted by lordord
Hello !
What you think about this i made 1 month ago for a customer? Something i can make better?
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I'd like to see that one customer who pays you for this "work".
Don't get me wrong but this is beyond "decent".
1. Color Correction is out of place. Basically you just applied 1 cc on your whole clip. Dark areas are too dark etc.
2. transitions are really bad, like the first "hard cut" @ 0:04. Learn some smooth transitions and apply them correctly.
3. velocity is unsynced to the track and even too fast at @ 0:19 (from very slow to fast af in 2 seconds...), try to sync the shots to the song alternatively add some cinematics.
4. Your pan & crop keyframes are way too harsh. Set the keyframe-interpolation to smooth and leave some place while cropping. Don't pan & crop at any random time, try to combine them with good placed transitions.
5. I don't get the "motion track" at 0:13 with the green video copilot saber. It's misplaced.
6. don't overuse the same overlay again and again, also set the opacity a little bit lower.