Hack ofc

can someone tell me whats wrong with this script i cant even turn it on if u know what i mean
this is how it looks at me with new offsets
this is for disabling hacks and tele to 270:270

[ENABLE]
alloc(DetectGM,512)
label(ReturnName)
label(PassCheck)
label(Tele)
label(Evasive)
label(Vac)
label(NonAggro)
registersymbol(DetectGM)

DetectGM:
cmp [eax+70],5D4D475B
jnz PassCheck

mov byte ptr [Evasive],B9
mov dword ptr [Evasive+1],Tele
mov dword ptr [Evasive+5],9090E1FF
mov dword ptr [Vac],891C508B
mov word ptr [Vac+4],2051
mov dword ptr [NonAggro],5486B70F
mov dword ptr [NonAggro+4],8B000001
PassCheck:
mov [esi+0c],00000000
jmp ReturnName

Tele:
mov [eax],10E //Co-ordinate x
mov [eax+4],10E //Co-ordinate y
mov dword ptr [esp+20],10E //Co-ordinate x
jmp Evasive+9

005535E3: //Update: C7 46 0C 00 00 00 00 89 47 04
jmp DetectGM
nop
nop
ReturnName:


00603D9B: //Update: 8B 08 8B 50 04 89 4C 24 20
Evasive:

0045C66D: //Update: 8B 50 1C 89 51 20
Vac:

0053D06A: //Update: 0F B7 86 54 01 00 00 8B
NonAggro:

[DISABLE]
dealloc(DetectGM)
unregistersymbol(DetectGM)
005535E3: //Update: C7 46 0C 00 00 00 00 89 47 04
mov [esi+0c],00000000
00603D9B: //Update: 8B 08 8B 50 04 89 4C 24 20
mov ecx,[eax]
mov edx,[eax+04]
mov dword ptr [esp+20],ecx