epic weapon in my server his level is 15 and i can't level it up and can't put dragon soul in her and it don't play sent sword and fast balde please help me
Most of your grammar is incorrect...Quote:
epic weapon in my server his level is 15 and i can't level it up and can't put dragon soul in her and it don't play sent sword and fast balde please help me
lets make it little less shitty (please correct me if i'm wrong)
don't chain and, instead try using a comma with single and in the end
i.e i love smoking, programming, something else, other thing and being an asshole
instead of
i love smoking and programming and something else and other thing and being an asshole
see ? it makes a different
also referring to the epic weapon as his or her is incorrect
Mary has a long hair, her hair is so pretty
Mark is stupid, his brain almost made up of cookies
my server is fucked up, its codes are missed up
and its not it's , its is for possessive while it's is shorten for it is or it has
also it's scent sword and fast blade
also try learn debugging, it helps alot !
My native language is French and I'm sure I missed some other errors.Quote:
Lets (Every sentence begins with a capital letter. If you meant "Let us" it's spelled "Let's". If you meant "Allow" it's spelled "Lets".) make it little less shitty (please correct me if I'm (The first person pronoun "I" is always capitalized.) wrong). (Every sentence ends with a ".".)
Don't (Every sentence begins with a capital letter.) chain and, instead try using a comma with single and in the end
i.e I (The first person pronoun "I" is always capitalized.) love smoking, programming, something else, other thing and being an asshole. (Every sentence ends with a ".".)
Instead of
I love smoking and programming and something else and other thing and being an asshole.
See ? It makes a difference.
Also referring to the epic weapon as his or her is incorrect.
Mary has a long hairs, her hairs are so pretty.
Mark is stupid, his brain is almost made up of cookies.
My server is fucked up, its codes are messed up.
Its not it's , its is for possessive while it's is shorten for it is or it has.
Also it's scent sword and fast blade .
Also try learn debugging, it helps a lot !