Hallo, in der Schule muss ich jetzt alle zwei Wochen nen englisch Text schreiben. Da mein letzter nicht besonders gut war *gg* wollte ich mal euch, die E*Pvpers Community fragen, ob ihr mir beim korrigieren helfen könnt.
P.S Bitte schreibt nicht sowas wie :"OMFG wtf was schreibst du für Sh*t xD".
Ich schreibe keine guten Aufsätze (vorallem in Fremdsprachen nicht xD) Also bitte nur konstruktive Kritik.
Ich danke für jede Hilfe und wäre froh, wenn jmd sich die Mühe macht und mir helfen würde ;D
Hier der Text :
P.S Bitte schreibt nicht sowas wie :"OMFG wtf was schreibst du für Sh*t xD".
Ich schreibe keine guten Aufsätze (vorallem in Fremdsprachen nicht xD) Also bitte nur konstruktive Kritik.
Ich danke für jede Hilfe und wäre froh, wenn jmd sich die Mühe macht und mir helfen würde ;D
Hier der Text :
Wenn i-was nicht unklar ist, einfach fragen.^^Quote:
Clothes written by (Ich will mein Name Privat behalten^^)
Clothes are important for quite every person. Everybody likes different clothes. Everybody can wear that sort of clothes, which he wants to wear. But there are some occupations, where you have to wear a suit or something like that. A manager with a sweatshirt and jeans is a bit weird, in my opinion. Some examples: a doctor has to wear a white coat and a manager has to wear a suit. If those people don’t wear such sort of clothes, you won’t think, they are doctors or managers. But nobody will wear a suit in a disco, or a t-shirt with a skull in the church.
In a book of Gottfried Keller was written:”Kleider machen Leute”, and that’s true. In this book was a poor dressmaker, who went to a different town. He wore a suit, and all the other people meant, he was an important person, because of the suit.
And there are people who only spend their money on expensive label clothes. Like women who buys 3000 Fr. Shoes. In my opinion, they only want to show, that they have enough money to buy this label. But there are good labels, there aren’t so expensive, but quality has its price.
But in school it’s pretty important which label you wear. If you don’t wear any label clothes you are “uncool” or other things. And you always have to read the “Bravo”, to check what is IN at the moment, and what is OUT (important for girls^^.) Fortunately it isn’t so important, what you wear in the school.
Are label clothes better than clothes without a label? I don’t think so. And on many label clothes you pay more for the label, than for the shirt. In most cases children in China, or other countries made the clothes. They work for quite nothing, but the people have to work, because they can’t go to school.