Hilfe bei Englischübungen

Hey,

ich hab keine Ahnung ob man hier nach Hilfe bei der Schule fragen darf, wenn ja, mache ich es mal.

Ich schreibe nächste Woche 'ne Arbeit über u.a. Bildbeschreibungen. Das ist ds einzige wo ich mir unsicher bin.

Es geht um folgendes Bild:
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Ich übe mit einem Freund, hier mein Text, dann seiner:

In the picture I can see a soldier who is wearing a helmet. He is crying. His face looks very frightened. Tears drop down his face. Maybe he is at war. I think his family dies or hies buddy. Perhaps the brutality and the murderers damage him mentaly.

Seiner:

In the picture you can see a soldier, he wear a helmet fron the army. He cries, and the water driped down his face. He is coloured black. Maybe he is sad, because he had lose a friend or his family. I think he is fighting in a war, and must kill other people.


Das war sein Text.
Bitte um Hilfe.
Wenn's "illegal" ist bitte sofort closen.

LG

inb4 "is kein Hausaufgabenforum closed"

In the picture You can see a soldier who is wearing a helmet. He is crying. His face looks very frightenned. Tears drop down his face. Maybe he is in a war. I think his family died or his buddy. Perhaps the cruelty of the war shocked him in a way. That could be an explanation for the sadness in his face.




In the picture you can see a soldier, he wears a helmet from the army. He cries, you can see the tears going down his face. He is coloured black Lass solche Sätze weg, sag wenn dann, he got black skin.. Maybe he is sad, because he lost a friend or his family. I think he is fighting in a war, and must kill other people.


Habs mal bisschen überarbeitet.

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In the picture you can see the face of a black man. He seems to be amused. Probably he spotted a KFC bucket full of chicken wings and is about to steal and eat them.

Kein Hausaufgaben-Forum btw.

Hat jemand mein Fahrrad gesehen?

wo ist der bus?

#closed